(!Blood! !Lots of bad language!) Jim-"Hey narrator would you like a coffee?" And narrator say "sure I have will have a cup-" and Jim says and does Jim-makes the cup of coffee for him "alright here you go-" We start our tale in a simple kitchen with a cup of coffee.
Our narrator is standing in the kitchen when a young man named Jim walks up and asks him if he'd be interested in sharing a coffee with him. The narrator says yes and takes the coffee from Jim. That's our opening scene. The two have just sat down to have some coffee... and then bam! A loud gunshot comes from behind the narrator, and he falls over in shock on the floor.
Jim-"WHAT THE HE-"(Great, but we still got some questions to answer! Do the attackers have a gun or was that just a loud bang out of nowhere? And who's the attacker? What does he look like? And most of all, how many attackers are there? The answer to these questions will change how the scene plays out, so you can either go for one attacker or a bunch. Whatever you want, just make sure you describe how many attackers there are and what they look like. And what happens next?)????-runs in and steals the narrator
(Ok, that's a great start. A mysterious figure barges in and kidnaps the narrator, and we have no idea who he is. That's a very good opening scene... but now what? The narrator has just been kidnapped... what happens next? Where does the mysterious figure take the narrator? And why did he choose to go after the narrator?)
