[P.E.T AWARDS 2023] - || CLOSED || Kpop awards

-BEST PLOT TWIST || RESULTS-

P.E.T. AWARDS

BEST PLOT TWIST

Final lineup [For Prizes]:

1. ViniShah2 [9.5/10]

2. 4everSherlocked [8.5/10]

3. Cratimy [8/10]

Reviews are below:

Judge:

I M Possible Love by ViniShah2 [9.5/10]

You have no idea how grateful I am that Bora married Yoongi in the end like... I was about to complain that he deserved better but then... I like what you did in the epilogue when we didn't really know who she got married to and then the grand reveal was the true plot twist of the story. The idea was well executed because, throughout the whole story, I was sure she's gonna marry Jimin. The setup for this to happen was so obvious and then... Gotcha! I don't need to add anything more. Just good job and a great definition of the best plot twist. Sometimes it doesn't have to be emotional or heartbreaking or tragic. It just has to surprise the reader. And that's exactly what you did to me.

The Cupid Complex by 4everSherlocked [8.5/10]

I loved the idea of the story so much. At first, I thought it will be something similar to what I have read before but no. You kept me on the edge of my seat through the whole story. There were so many up and downs for all of the characters and ships, something was happening all the time and that's what kept me reading. I would say they were many plot twists here, mostly connected to being dead/undead, so you played with our emotions all the time yet the emotions were well-distributed. The more important events were highlighted and you didn't use the shocking factor too often. Aish! It is really well done! I would say the setup for each turning point could have been done a little bit better, but nevertheless good job. Amazing story!

My little brothers by Taewifey30 [7/10]

The story consists mostly of dialogue and I was so confused going through the story trying to understand what was actually happening. And there were many things happening here. For me, the story was a little bit too chaotic and valued a shock factor above anything else; it means you put a lot of turning points, cliffhangers, and plot twists into it, probably to make the plot more interesting. Such things are generally good and keep people sited on the edge of their seats. However, putting too much of them takes away that surprise. So maybe it would be better to stick to one or maybe two key points and plot twists to make the story more coherent. Either way, it was a fun read, although the form of the story (grammar, italics, and other stuff) made it quite challenging. If it was a little more organized I would enjoy it more. But still, I liked your take on Jimin and his character. Thanks!

Detective Jeon by tbr_tales [7.5/10]

Generally, I like crime and mystery stories, especially when I can follow mc actions and try to solve the case myself. Your story has a lot of solid plot points and side stories to create a solid mystery and outline in the end. The only thing that made it weird for me was that the chapters were mostly based on dialogues which is unusual for crime stories. Like every clue we learned was told by someone or by seeing the pictures. Nothing we could focus on while examining the places, guessing, or noticing it ourselves. That's what the story lacks, some descriptions. And as we continue there are lots of plot twists with where the story should go: introducing new characters, new clues etc. But I feel like the tension was not distributed equally. I mean, the last plot twist was pretty big but it didn't feel like a culmination of everything that happened before. Or maybe I kinda predicted what you were about to put here (still thanks to you leaving clever clues). However, with so many catching plot twists through the story maybe I expected to be even more jungshooked in the end, you know? Nevertheless, thank you for your work and for coming up with such a story. Maybe I'll consider joining part two? Cheers!

2 Mafia King's deadly girl Samia_V [5/10]

The story is really chaotic, both in how it's written and plot-wise. I'm not gonna lie I had a problem following the events happening in each of the chapters. You mentioned a lot of serious topics (as it is strongly based on violence, non-consent stuff, and mafia things) which were treated rather lightly. I know that Watt and ff in general tend to glorify such tropes but nevertheless, sometimes I felt as if the events in your story were not really thought through and put there solely for the shock value. (Although I'm glad you put a warning before these most triggering scenes). If you skipped some of the uncomfortable harassment scenes the story would still be dark. I believe there weren't really needed there. Because of that, the story lost its integrity and the factor that made me want to read it further. As for the plot twist, as I said, there were many of them, mostly as a shock value which makes it hard to pick the most important one. The best plot twists happen when you don't expect them. And it's hard not to expect something new to happen in such a chaotic story where something new happens every two chapters.

Lusting Love by imtwinkle_ [1/10]

Although the story is tagged as mature probably nothing could have prepared me for what I read there. I don't know where people get these ideas from but some of the scenes you put there were simply disgusting. Dragging any fictional or non-fictional character into such a story is a great offense to the person it's based on and victims of similar behavior. Taking into consideration that the y/n turns out to be the sister of the boys (the great plot twist) everything in this plot is simply wrong. The plot twist made the story even worse than it already was, regardless of what the boys did later to redeem themselves. I know mature themes are popular but I'll never accept the glorification of rape in stories, especially done in such a way as you did. Call me old, nonobjective or unfair but I'm not able to judge this book in any other way.

ABNORMALITY; Free Eyeballs by Cratimy [8/10]

I'd like to start by saying thank you for a fresh and creative story. It is a survival one as you mentioned, the action is just right as well as the characters. They fit the story perfectly with their characters, backstories, and relations with others. The story doesn't have one major plot twist (or at least not yet) but taking under consideration it's a survival one, each stage of the game comes with its little plot twist. Who will go on? Who will survive? Who's going to die? I like the tension you created there and was truly surprised by some of the actions and outcomes. As if I was watching a survival show for real. The story was interesting, well-executed, and even decent grammar-wise, so congrats my dear!