RWBY Reading of 'Relic of the Future'

10. Atlessian Mission

The creator of Relic of the future is , all credits for the Story go to him, I'm just building from there, go read it if you haven't and then come back to read this.

Hey

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Yep, it's me, back at it again.

It was a hard time, but I've managed to finish it a little earlier than I expected so, here it is, and thanks to everyone for the support.

I really like that everyone seemed so fine with me just taking the time I needed to, don't get me wrong, I wasn't about to forget my real responsibilities because I had to write this, it's just,. Idk I guess I expected a different thing when I said I may take even more time.

But none of that shit now, you guys were cool with it and now I'm cool with writing more.

Now where do I start the commentary.

Have I mentioned how much I love writing Qrow and Raven in this? because let me tell you that I absolutely do, and their bickering is actually something fun to make and it's kinda spontaneous as I don't have to think too much into it.

I just go 'siblings arguing' and my brain already has something cooked.

Onto other matters.

I have received a Beta petition (that I honestly hadn't seen til yesterday, which I'm considering due to the fact that I'm not the most clean writer).

Lancelot's little monologue as some may find out it comes at the mention of Zenhope, LucasEmiya and a Guest's suggestions, being these the first, second and last respectively, that while interesting, I'm not sure to take on, maybe later if something but not right now.

It's less a matter if I can do something along those lines rather being that if I can do it while upholding the motivation to do this one at the same time, and at the same time not take another fucking forever at it.

I get it, reading something you find interesting and waiting a full month to read another part might be a pain, but to do something decent time and effort are to important parts of the formula.

I do want to make it clear that it really makes me happy see people enjoying this and I hope the following chapters are to your liking as much as mine.

Lastly, I wanna go over are the suggestions I got from last time.

A guest suggested a fight to somewhat mesure the level of the participants of the story and the spectators...You know, I do believe we're approaching an intermission due to them not having eaten in what probably is an unreasonable amount of time and I'd like to keep that somewhat realistic and this might be some middle time activity that'd go pretty well with it.

Nayelmisael15, hermano pensamos en lo mismo, eso era algo que tenia pensado pero que no realmente sabia cuando iba a hacer algo así, aunque un intermedio puede ser una buena oportunidad y así incluir varias ideas misceláneas que lleguen (de hecho también me permite hacer una idea de ZhenHope para que Ruby lea, the second choice)

I want to say, V-Trigger, the idea of bringing future Ruby while I think is absolutely awesome because of how many ideas it has given me, and I'd like to include it, it kinda breaks things a little bit, having the future and past version of her in the room can lead to interactions that, in a conversation that is not controlled by the script (as I try to make it) future Rubes would more than likely speak everything.

But as a onetime thing like Summer, I'm definitively doing it at some point.

With that over, here's the chapter.