Rise Of Revin Wizards

start of the adventure

Hello everyone, this is my first story so try to be gentle and I can use constructive criticism, thanks
And tell me what you think always :)

The shocking news she heard from her father, the news of her marriage from his friend's son. It shocked her, because she wanted to live her life she was yet to be married, Amy hated the idea that she was forced to do that in order to keep her father's position. That was not her problem, but Amy always defied her father and did daring this just to change his mind?
What was different this time?
Amy's life would never be the same, soon she'll come to figure out the real story of her homeland.

Meanwhile..
There was a village on the edges of the city. This village was not very rich nor the people were wealthy.
In the village, the eldest woman in the village who was called Kerala sent two boys to get her some things from out side the village. The two boys were called Danny and Willi.
On their way to get kerala's things..

Danny: listen we should go the other way it's not safe here..

Willi: why not here? It's not like we will lose our way, you're always afraid.

Danny and Willi kept walking around until they reached a strange forest.
They were too late that the people of the village started to worry.
Kerala : I sent them to the market to get me some things, it's all I know and I had no idea they'll be lost.

Mrs Edwin: I knew it! If they listened to me they wouldn't be lost.

Meanwhile..

Amy: what?! I can't do this father I don't care about your position it's not my responsibility to keep it, find your own way to keep it and that is final .

Mr Alexandre: you're my daughter and I shall decide everything even those which concern your life.

Amy escaped of the house and ran all night until she reached a small village where she stayed for a few days she wasn't used to work at all in her whole life but now its different she had to work so she could survive.

?: it's been a pleasure to meet you we haven't met a stranger here in the village for a great while thanks for coming.

Amy: it's alright you too helped me a lot I don't know what I  would've  done without you so thank you as well.

Danny: let's get back and ask we might find our way back to the shop.
Willi: no I want to see around it looks like an abandoned place maybe I could make it a station for me.
Danny: you are so stubborn that I can't change your mind.

They went into a forest that was so dark and big it looked like it was surrounded by gates of trees.

During this while Amy was still trying to prove her point..

"I have to keep going on I don't want to go home until I be able to show my dad that I can take care of my self like any other person in this world." Amy said while she was wandering around the area she was so tired that she couldn't see well so she fell asleep under a shadowy big tree.
While she was asleep under the tree two people came and saw her..

?: who's that? She doesn't look like people here. Dre carry her and let's go.
Dre: ok Vivienne.
They took her with them to where they lived.

"Aaaah that was a great sleepoooahhh! Where the hell am I?" Exclaimed Amy loudly. She wandered around the small room with her eyes "they don't seem living comfortably, aah anyway I need to get out of here as soon as I can".
She jumped of the bed and started to walk out side when she saw a girl with blue hair and and dark eyes. She sounded evil to Amy.
Amy: excuse me, how can I reach the town of Kingsmen?
The blue headed girl: and why do want to go there?
Amy: its where I live I actually left because I wanted to prove that I'm independent to my dad.
The blue headed girl: your dad?
Amy: yes my dad.
The blue headed girl: and what's your name?
Amy: Amy, what's yours?
The blue headed girl: Vivienne.
Amy: pleasure to meet you.
Vivienne: the pleasure is mine.

Meanwhile,

The two boys in the forest..
Willi: whoa that's sooo awesome look at that there are so many fruits we can eat.
Danny: yes I'm so hungry I'll eat some apples.
?: you're gonna pay for them.
Danny and Willi: who are you?
?: I am the one who should ask you that.
Danny: my name's Danny and he's Willi.
?: well then you two come with me.