CHAPTER 1 - i'm going to tell you an incredible story

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PLACE

We open inside an apartment in a German city. It is medium size, not too big, not too small. Perfectly cozy. It's winter, and the snow is falling lightly outside the apartment's windows.
Kokoa weather.


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Our protagonist, Saki Aiuchi, 20-something years old, is currently standing in front of the bathroom mirror, getting ready to go out. Clothes are trimmed, hair is combed, and some cologne is put on as well. Before walking away from the mirror, Saki smiles.

Trying to calm down, Saki walks into the cozy living room.  Saki's roommate and his girlfriend, are snuggling under a blanket. There are empty mugs on the coffee table, and you could see a teapot being heated if you looked toward the kitchen door.  As Saki sits down on an armchair, next to the couch the couple is lying on, the girl turns her head.

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Rommate's Girlfriend

Excited, Saki?


Saki

[fidgeting, uncalm yet playful]

Oh, yeah... 

This is definitely an excitement issue... 

Really, there is a whole lot of pressure on tonight, I'm about to explode.


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Irritated by Saki's nervousness, the roommate turns his eyes.

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Roommate 

Come on, Saki... 

We already went through all this... The night's gonna go well!

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⏰ Last updated: Sep 04, 2024 ⏰

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