Poet vs. Poet

Okay guys so if your reading this, you want to read our poems! First of all, thanks! Second of all we want you to comment and vote for the poem you like most, not just the poet.

Lets get started!

The first chosen topic was a road. Boring, huh? Well we did our best to go with it, and make it wondrous. Please also read ExcuseMyGrammar's road poem, tell us which is better, and vote for the best! Enjoy. 👍(:

Alright y'all... Here's my entry!

Hope you like it!

An old dirt road,

Carried a little car with quite a load,

A pair of eyes so cold,

You'd think she would've been bold,

But she just did what she was told,

Faster and faster the car still rolled,

I sacrificed my only little piece of gold,

Now I'm left in trash, and don't have a hand to hold,

I looked into her pure face, Shame was what it showed,

As I looked at her, I saw a pair of eyes so cold.

So many memories stared back at me,

I saw her past that no one else could see,

I was her promise, and it was meant to be,

Her heart was locked and only I held the key,

As I stood there watching helplessly,

So many memories stared back at me.

An old dirt road,

Carried a little car with quite a load.