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Another version of Cinderella

This last weeks, we worked of fairy tails so we did a parody of the traditionnal story ^^
This is my version :)

          One upon a time, there was a girl named Cinderella. She had an evil stepmother, two evil stepbrothers and a little girl named Rose. Her daughter's father was killed by a mysterious killer, but nobody knew who it was.

One day, Rose, who wanted a new father, discovered that the prince organised a ball in the castle. She decided that the prince will probably be a very good father so she said to her mother mother that she shoulded go to the ball.

Cinderella didn't want go to the ball, but Rose had an idea...

She called Cinderella's fairy godmother and ask her to come. The fairy godmother came and Rose explained to her the situation.

The fairy godmother created a beautiful dress and offered it to Cinderella for the ball, and she said all the things that she had to do to have this result.

But when Cinderella and her fairy godmother spoke, Cinderella's evil stepfamily decided to destroye the dress.

Rose was so sad, because Fairy godmother had created this dress with all her love and because she will probably never have a father.

Mice, who were passing by here, were sad for her and decided to created a new gorgeous dress for Cinderella. They told Rose that her mother will have a lovely dress for the ball, and that she will to go it.

Indeed, when Cinderella discovered the dress created by the mice, she decided to go to the ball to honored them.

Rose, the fairy godmother and the mice were so happy by this new!

At the ball, Cinderella and the prince fell in love and decided to get married.

The mother and the daughter left the evil stepfamily and came to live in the castle with the mice and sometimes, the fairy godmother went to visit them in the castle.

And they lived happily ever after.

END