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Anthology Title  : 7/ 10

The book title is unique and interesting and goes well as an anthology Title.

Poems Title :  8/10

All the poems title has its significance and distinctiveness.

Cover : 6.5/ 10

The cover is really pretty. I like how you have chosen the perfect picture. The little God in there sleeping peacefully under moonlight makes sense and contention with your book title and theme.

Grammar and punctuation :  12.5 /15

No grammatical mistakes are seen. Good Vocabulary and sentence construction. Easy to understand the poems. Good that you did not use any bombastic words in middle.

I thing I have noticed throughout your writing is that you have written in uppercase after a coma which is grammatically incorrect. You can only use uppercase after coma when you are writing a proper noun (a name of an individual person, place, organization, etc) after a comma, you have to capitalize it.
Rest is good.

Originality  & Creativity  : 17/20

I like the setting of the sonnets. All the poems have different meanings and noteworthyness and I loved the way you centered the theme throughout the sonnets.

All the sonnets have different meaning and perspective which makes your book more captivating. My favorite is "Orange", among all.

Coherence of form and structure (writing style) :  16/ 20

I love the way you have used words to rhyme your poems, and it is really good for the audience to understand the depths of your writings.
I have noticed in some places you have truncated the words. Maybe because of wattpad sentence lengths.

Overall Presentation : 13/15
It is understood that how much efforts you have put to write this amazing piece. From the cover of the book to the banners and writing such beautiful sonnets, you did a splendid job.

I have seen a very few people writing poems from their own and this good. And you are one of them. Had a great time reading those.  Keep writing and entertaining.

Total:-  80/100

Total:-  80/100

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