The gay ghost and his revenge ✔

Crystal and Rhyidan arrive at the house.

"I don't see why we have to move to the middle of nowhere, into a rubbish house like that. Look at the state of it, it's a death trap!" Crystal says, getting out of the car at the same time as Rhyidan.

Rhyidan sighs then speaks, "You know why we have to move, we have been over this a hundred times already! Just get your stuff out the boot, and get in the bloody house!"

"Oh yeah, You bought this dump because, it was Mum and Dad's dream house. In case it hasn't escaped you're notice they're dead!" Crystal blurted out loudly.

Rhyidan moves around the front of the car towards Crystal.

"Don't you think, I didn't know that?! I miss them every day, and you're just making it worse because, you wanted to stay behind. You thought mum and dad's spirits are still around, and you said we should stay in case they "contact us." Yeah, right! Gimmie a break!" Rhyidan angrily.

"Just because, I'm a believer of the paranormal, doesn't mean you can pick on me." Crystal shouts, and runs to her new room, slamming the door shut in the process.

Rhyidan sighs, and goes to his room.

The ghost named Marcus is watching all this unfold, and follows Rhyidan to his room. The floor creaks as Marcus moves around while, Rhyidan is unpacking.

Rhyidan walks out the room to check on his sister, and knocks on her door.

"Crystal, I'm sorry Okay?" Rhyidan sighs when there is no reply.

Marcus follows him. He pokes Rhyidan on the shoulder, and Rhyidan turns around.

"Hello Gorgeous." Marcus wore a cocky grin.

"I'm so sorry, I didn't realize anyone still lived here. I was under the impression the house was empty, after all I just bought the place." Rhyidan informed the ghost with shock clear on his face.

Marcus rolls his eyes, "Of course, I'm still here. I'm a ghost after all."

"I'm sorry, what is this, a joke?" Rhyidan asks as he begins to pale.

"Yeah, Of course, it's a joke." Marcus answered sarcastically.

"I don't have time for this." Rhyidan sighs.

Without another word, Marcus kisses Rhyidan.

"Are you seriously trying to mess with my head?! Whoever heard of a gay ghost anyway?" Rhyidan mumbled, but Marcus still heard him.

"If I were you, I wouldn't mock me." Marcus was void of all emotion.

"Oh yeah?! What are you going to do?" Rhyidan taunted.

"You'll see." Marcus smiles adding a bit of mystery in the air and then disappears in a poof of smoke.

Marcus's ghostly form appears in Crystal's room.

Rhyidan hears Crystal screaming.

"Crystal, are you okay?!" Rhyidan shouts. He runs up to Crystal's room to find Marcus grabbing her.

"You'll soon regret rejecting me, Rhyidan." Marcus smiles, and disappears in a poof of smoke with Crystal and then reappears on a hill close to where the house is stood.

Rhyidan searches frantically for his sister, and eventually finds her with Marcus outside of the grounds.

With a last smile to Rhyidan, and Crystal in his arms, so that she couldn't escape, Marcus jumps off the cliff.

Crystal screams as she falls off the edge of the cliff with Marcus as Rhyidan helplessly looks on.

Rhyidan rushes down the cliff safely as he can and picks up his Sister's lifeless body up the cliff.

Rhyidan who is heartbroken at his sister's death is distraught. He buries her somewhere on the grounds.

A few months later Rhyidan is found dead with pills from several bottles surrounding him.

The End.

Thanks to MadCatRoses for helping me rewrite this and I've added a bit extra in! Hope you guys like the new rewrite!