Chapter 10: A New TeacherOriginal
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And here's the beginning of my era. And... it's okay. It's not until recently that I learned how to create not so stilted dialogue. So most of the scenes I wrote feel pretty stiff. I don't hate the way I handled Aizawa's interrogation, but I could've done a better job. This is the first introduction of Wally, and he finally came back last chapter. This is also the last nightmare sequence and it's fine (I'm not counting What It Means To Be Human as while that is a nightmare, it's a completely different format and has nothing to do with the studio). The black and white thing was an abandoned plot line which would have appeared later on. It's at least not a straight adaptation of the episode it adapted, but honestly this was a nothing burger of a chapter. I also don't like the design I made for the hero costume. There was always a planned redesign so it was never meant to be permanent, but at least give the guy a body suit that doesn't look like his skin.
Chapter 11: Distorted Faces
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