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TITLE
It fits well! In an instant, the reader is captured in the sci-fi/fantasy vibe of the book and I believe it's a unique title too. So great job on that!
BLURB
An excellent blurb as well! It gives an accurate trailer of the story and gives out no spoilers. It has a very smooth continuity to it too. If I had to pinpoint an error, it would just be to replace the comma with a semi-colon after the word GreenerPastures in the first line. Overall, great job on that!
COVER
I love the choice of cover and the colours that go with it. The title is written in really good calligraphy. It is visible along with the author's name so good job on that!
PLOT
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My favourite thing about reading a book is when I feel so much anger or happiness or sadness that makes me want to throw a book into someone's head. That was pretty much how I felt when I was reading the scene between the scientists and Clay and Anpiel.
The assumptions Clay makes about the outside world and her cautious personality and protective nature about Anpiel were very well written. The descriptions were strung with beautiful words. I didn't find any grammatical errors to pinpoint either.
OVERALL
It feels like this book is a well-polished novel and has been edited quite a few times. It might very well be a hardcover book I would keep on my bookshelf. I believe that if you joined a few clubs, it would very well help in increasing and gaining your readers too!
