Reincarnated as SUCCUBUS!

Wait- i DIED!

   

No art used is mine btw

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     27 year old Emma Heart live a very horrible life. Her parents were ignorant and neglective towards her, and only paid attention to her beautiful, perfect sister Audrey. She was fast, strong, had a perfect body, with no defects, except for being a brat, meanwhile Emma? She was slow, slightly obese, weak, and a virgin her whole life.

     All I remember before the incident was seeing my sister distracted by her phone while crossing the street, completely unaware a truck was hurdling towards her. I don't really know what came over me because I've hated her, envied her, wanted to BE HER! But there I was, sprinting to save her. I pushed her out of the way last second, then it all went black.
     When I came to, I saw my sister infront of my and on her knees bawling her eyes out. I was in pain so I didn't do anything. Not that I could.
     'It hurts... so bad...' I thought

    "Ability added: Pain resistance" a mysterious voice said in my head.

     'It's so warm...'

     "Ability added: heat resistance" the mysterious voice said"

     'Now it's too cold...'

     "Ability added: cold resistance" the voice added. "Ability cold resistance and heat resistance have combined into ability: Elemental resistance. Additional ability added: total elemental control"

     Then it all went dark. After that, I woke up laying in the... grass?

     I tried sitting up and to my surprise, I could! "Where... am I?" I looked around and saw a forest and behind it, a town. I started standing and then noticed my body. "WTF!"
     I had the perfect body with perfect curves, perfect breasts, a perfect ass, perfect everything. I was shocked and then noticed a small sword on my hip.

     "Weird... I LOVE IT!" I yelled enthusiastically. I unsheathed the sword and suddenly felt 100 times stronger, faster. Just 100 times everything. "Whoa..."

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     As I walked through the forest, a bunch of weird looking creatures stared at me weirdly, but I let it go.

     Then I saw a human. I got excited and ran to them. "HELLO!" I shouted as I ran.

     The man looked at me then gave me a disturbing smile before pouncing on me and trying to do some... stuff  to me, but a lovely, mysterious woman saved me.

     "Follow me" the mysterious woman said as she extended her hand out to me.

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This is my first book so please give me tips and ideas, along with a rating🙏