My school essay through out the day

Writing an informal email

Now write an email to your friend giving some information about renewable energy in your country.(100 words)

This is part of the email you get from a friend in England.

We are all making posters at school about renewable energy around the world. I want to make mine about renewable energy in your country. Can you send me some information about it?

My essay
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Hello Grey! 

How are you? It's been a long time since we talk.
Sure, I can give some information about renewable energy in my country. Malaysia has a few examples of renewable energy , such as hydroelectric. Hydroelectric is powered by the water, in those big rivers. But the problems is about the level of the water, when it is a hot day the water will get evaporated by the sun or the moon can pull back and make high tides.
I hope my information is useful for you. Good luck with your poster. Do send me a picture of your poster when you are finished.

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