Is this right?

One Direction part 3

Niall Horan, Louis Tomlinson, Zayn Malik, Liam Payne, and Harry styles..
Will you please follow me. One of the workers at the show, called me and four other names. I was sure they was calling us in to see us cry, you know for the show. But to my suprise they werent.
We were standing on stage, wainting for the judges to talk. We held each other thight, as they were about to explain why they has us back on stage, we were so nervous.
'You were all to taltented to let go of indiviatully, so we've decided to put you in a group, and you will contine in the show like that'  I couldn't belive it, I was in total shock. We were all so happy, I hugged one of the Boys, Louis, so thight i think he couldn't breath, but I coulnd't neither.
We all ran off stage right to our familys. This was amazing.

First time we hang out was at my dads. We were supossed to reaherse, but we ended up playing football and chat instead, I already knew by the first minutes, that we were going to be best friends forever.
We were all very different, but yet we had a lot in commen, all of us.
Louis is the oldest, only by a little over a year tho, he is funny and extreamly pretty, i feel we are going to be great friends, he is also very good at football. Niall who is the second oldest, loves food, he can litterly eat anywhere and anything, he is also funny and even tho he is one of the oldest, he is still the groups baby. Oh yeah, and he is irish, while the rest of us is british.
Liam is very mature, and without him we would probably end up in jail.
Zayn is amazingly good at arts, he likes to paint and be creative, and boy he can hit that high note.
Even tho we've only known each other for like five minutes, we already know each other like we've been friends forever.