taglish! grammatical errors!
chapter one:
"𝙻𝚞𝚗𝚊 𝙰𝚗𝚊𝚜𝚝𝚊𝚜𝚒𝚊 𝙳𝚎 𝙻𝚘𝚜𝚎𝚝𝚝𝚎."Luna pov.
"Omg girl! she's so perfect!"
"Sya ba si L-Luna Anastasia De Losette?! damn! so pretty!"
"real! mayaman na, matalino pa! saan ka pa!"
"mag confess kana kasi bro! bahala ka, andami nya pa namang fans! maunahan ka pa nila!"
"t-talaga? s-sige na nga!"
This is the first day of class, naglalakad ako right now, on the way sa room na kabibilangan ko.
I'm Luna Anastasia De Losette, my family is the 3rd richest people in this world, I'm the best in this school, the rank one, and the smartest one. That's why, madaming tao ang kilala ako, and i hate it. I hate fame, i hate being popular, i hate being the center of attention.
I'm studying in Horizon University, it's a private school for all genders, and i hate the school system. I hate everything, but i have no right to complain, I'm not the one who's controlling my life, 'di ako ang nagdedesisyon sa sarili ko, kumbaga I'm so dependent sa pamilya ko, i have no choice, i need to follow their rules and decisions, or else, I will ruin their image. Yes, their damn image.
Is image really that matters? I don't know... hindi ko mahanap ang kasagutan dahil, my mind is so full of questions, and I'm drowning inside it.
Pagdating ko sa room ay kumatok muna ako sa door, and after that i held the door knob and open the door. That's how my mom taught me, you must knock before you enter, and walk straightly with your chin up and proud self. So 'yun nga ang ginawa ko, after i opened it, i enter the classroom... as usual, binalot ang classroom ng silence, they are all staring at me, again. I take a deep breath, and sit in the chair i picked.
I sighed again when i heard their murmurs, and whispers.. damn can't they just damn be silent? ih-chichismis mo nanga lang yung tao, ipaparinig mo pa."isn't she's Luna Anastasia De Losette?"
really? my full name? can't they just shorten it?
"oh! omg yes! sabi ng friend ko, ang smart nya daw! kaso..."
"kaso ano?"
"kaso masungit! ganda't talino nga, pangit naman ugali!"
tss. upakan pa kita dyan.
"talaga? mukhang 'di naman ah?"
pagsawsaw nung isa pa., kailan ba yan matatapos? i want silence already!
"Yes girl, mukha naman syang goods!"
Dumating na ang teacher, kaya tumigil na sila sa pang-go-gossip about sa'kin. Finally.
3 hours and a half minutes, natapos na yung discussions ng mga teachers, and it's our break time now.
Lumakad na'ko, patungong canteen, but suddenly, may guy na lumapit sa'kin, damn again? lagi nalang ba?."h-hi Ms. De Losette u-uhm" nauutal na said nung guy na lumapit, he looks like a playboy, that women won't chase.
"go bro! you can do it!" sigaw nung kasama nya, i sigh and just look at him.
"pwe-pwede ba kitang ligawan?" diretsong sambit nito sabay yuko, I gave him a wide smile, with smiling eyes too.
"hm, sorry but I'm prioritizing my studies right now, but it's up to you.. if you can wait." i said smiling. guess if it's fake or not.
the guy smile widely and nod.
"i will wait!" he said and run away with his friends, away from me.He won't, boys are like that. Mga scammers, they said they will wait, duh! tapos may iba ng nilalambing. They are so annoying. But, I'm a pretender anyway, i don't have any choice.
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