Death has been something unavoidable. For people. For animals. Monsters. Anyone living will die. You will die. I ... we will die.
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Ok cool. So it's my first time writing and I need input on how to make it better.
Is it too fast paced? is it too slow?
Should I add more details?
Like let me know I'm down to learn and be better just tell me in a respectful manner pls
Comment and heart it (?) so I can continue writing it. I'll let this marinate till I reach 4 chapters since this is a new hobby of mine Lmao.
Anyways
Bye bye ❤️
- Jade
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Land of the Gods
FantasySolis has finally joined his family after many battles. Will he be able to keep them together this time? Prequel Death has been something unavoidable. For people. For animals. Monsters. Anyone living will die. You will die. I ... we will die. I'm...
