Moonbeams camp

Meet the campers!

I just want to say first,I'm British,so if I say football I mean the British game of football,or if I say they ate chips,I mean like fish and chips type chips!

"Have you ever wondered what would happen if 21 different teenagers were put in a camp, to compete for 1million dollars? Well find out what would happen now,on moonbeams camp!"the host,violet everwood announces to the camera. "Every week they will compete in challenges, the loosing team will have to vote someone out! The voting ceremony will be held in the campfire area. The team will vote at the voting booth!"the camp has 4 big cabins. Two for both teams,split boys and girls. It has a cafeteria tent with a bathroom ,the campfire ,and the 'train station' where they are picked up after they get eliminated. Each contestant can do a confessional in the cabins,a private place tit share thoughts.

"Now let's meet the teenagers competing!" Crystal suggests as the train pulls up.the first person to step out is a girl.she has long black hair,down to her lower back, that falls loose. Her eyes are dark brown and she wears black eyeshadow. She wears a black skirt ,that's 'fingertip' length and a white crop top,with a denim jacket over that. She comes out frowning, carrying a tote bag on her shoulder. "Oh and here's lunar!"crystal smiles at her walking over to her

"This is where we're staying?" Lunar asks,getting a nod in response from crystal. Lunar sighs and goes to speak before she's interrupted by a girl coming out and shoving her out the way. The girl has blonde hair,tied in a messy bun and blue eyes . She wears a pair of tight shorts and a tank top. 

"Get out of the way,looser!" She says,chewing gum obnoxiously, texting on her phone.

"You must be Charlotte!" Crystal smiles,only getting an eye roll in response "aren't you a joy!oh look here's jake!" 

A strong looking boy comes out. He's wearing a football kit,with trainers instead of boots and no shin pads or anything.His short,curly,brown hair and green eyes make him very attractive.he looks like a popular boy.he glances around and smiles at the girls. 

"Welcome to camp!" Crystal says enthusiastically.the boys smiles attractively,making Charlotte blush.the next camper to step out is another boy. His short but curly hair is blonde and he has emerald green eyes.he wears a simple hoodie and jeans.he stands near jake. "Uh hi! I'm Cameron, it's nice to me-" he starts saying to jake,before getting interrupted by a girl and a boy tumbling out, both of them landing in a pile.

"Jay! Your so annoying!" The girl shouts at him. She has brown hair with blonde highlight and brown eyes. She wears a light-blue skirt and a matching blue top,with a black jacket over it, which is three sizes too big. 

"Jade! Are you wearing my hoodie!?" The boy argues back. He has short brown hair and the same eyes as jade. He wears a simple white top with a pair of jeans. "It's like three sizes too big!"

"It's not my fault you do rugby now is it?" She rolls her eyes at him. She glances at the other people.she gets a dirty look from Charlotte and a smile from lunar.she stands near lunar,making small talk.jay decides to stand next to Cameron,talking about a video game. 

"And the twins, jay and jade!" Violet points at them

-confessionals-

"That jade girl is so pretty! She looks nice too. I should talk to her soon." Lunar says,blushing slightly.

"Jay seems nice..and sane enough!hes pretty cute too.." Cameron says the last bit quite,blushing .

"I hate all of them" Charlotte says,groaning. "Well jakes pretty cute! I should talk to him more."

-confessionals out-

This isn't every camper,or the final product,but I want some opinions on it so far!