That this story might need a rewrite but only for the first 5 and maybe 6 chapters.
I just got done with school and started summer classes so I am a bit busy but I have a lot more free time than before so I took a moment to re-evaluate this story.
At the time I started this story, I was a terrible writer so I won't say that what I wrote was trash, I'd say it wasn't bad for my first try but not necessarily enough.
I don't know if I fleshed out characters properly, had good descriptions, dialogue and buildup for certain scenes, maybe I feel this way because I'm reading my own work which I already know everything about so I don't need characters to be fleshed out amazingly to understand them.
Still, I would like to ask what you all think, do you think I should rewrite them? The plot is all the same though a bit enhanced(I don't know, I feel like it's short? Is it?) and I might modify the later chapters a bit but all significant events remain the same.
Regardless, what do you all think? And if you have suggestions or specific issues with certain scenes, feel free to let me know.
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End of a normal life
Ficção GeralToday was supposed to be a normal day. Wake up greet your family, have breakfast, head to school, suffer through classes, have fun with friends, walk back home enjoying the sunset, get back home, do whatever and sleep. That was how Aiden Silver's da...
