help me

Demos POV
Today's my first day of school and I have a bruised face.great.I put my blue G.A.P hoodie on to cover up my scared and bruised Arms I had my bruised face and black eye my hair color is dark brown and Violet tips its down to my butt bone and I have scars and bruises I got glasses to their blue and black there black when there in light and sometimes blue in dem light and bright I have an ice blue blind eye and a bright blue eye they look the same but I m making breakfest for my dad I put a note on the counter it said
Dear dad
I went to school and I'm going to be gone for a while so don't worry but I might spend a night at a hotel so no worrys also
Sincerely you loveing punching bag girl demi
I left it on the counter and left I went on my skate board while listening to Really don't care by Cher LIoyd it explained my life I got to school I had a concussion
So one hit in the head there I go in coma or amnesia lol I got pushed and looked "Michael why " I screamed I'm in a concussion I might not get luck I might get both coma and amnesia
Michaels POV
I didn't push to hard but she screamed "Michael why" the boys looked at me I looked at her eyes great she had a concussion "she has a concussion"but how its her first day "I looked at her again shit its demi her dad abuses her but oh well she's still going to get bullied "her dad abuses her"how do you know"ex"I took her to the hospital they said she has amnesia we all laughed she started to dream "dad stop please" she turned into a wolf but she was black and white "no I'm not leaving with you I don't want to go with bullshit anymore"she turned back