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Just wanna say, this is a short story I wrote for school so the pacing and details is... Let's say it's incomplete and needs some work. So the story is very flawed, but I want to share it to hear your thoughts about my story, I accept any forms of criticism as long as it is constructive and not hateful. I was also driven by passion and determination as I wrote this story for school (I love writing:) ) , my story was probably the longest story that my English teacher had to check. I had fun writing this one despite again, it being very flawed, so I hope you enjoy!
Edit: I just realized that while publishing the chapters here, I forgot to put the italics and boldings just like the original story I submitted to ma'am so uh yeah, sorry, hehehe - uhm - hope you still enjoy the story regardless.
Edit: Okay, I already edited the story, putting the italics and bolding, so hope you really enjoy this time.

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