This is a better version of pitch perfect Donald love story. I'm not saying that was horrible, it's just I know I can do better. Also the last was on my phone so there was LOTS of mistakes. But anyway here's the better version. Hope you ENJOY!!
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I woke up to my phone going off loudly. I walked over and saw a text from Becca, we have been friends since as long as we can remember. BECCA: today we go to collge! YAY Me: Please try to be happy for me! Becca: fine but only for you! Then me mom shouted up the stairs "breakfasts ready!!" ME: got to go breakfast, txt when I get there!! Becca: K!! Then I ran downstairs grabbed a plate and went to sit outside. I put my orange juice on a table next to a seat with a Great view of the lake. Once I finished my food I gulped down my orange juice and ran upstairs. I packed everything except my Mac laptop. I went to my closet and started to look for something to wear. I decide on a purple flowy tank top, ripped black skinny jeans, with red heels. "Ready??"mom yelled up the stairs. I grabbed my laptop and put it in my clothes suitcase, grabbed my purse, put my phone in my back pocket, and took my suitcases down stairs. "Need help?" My dad asked and took my suitcases. I said bye to my schipperke, Midnight, it sounds kind of weird but im really gonna miss him! I walked out to the front, got into the car and said bye to the home that i clinged to for so long.
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sorry its really short but, i promise the others will be longer!!
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