Intro: hi every one this is my first Beyblade story so I may be rough around the edges but I'll try my best to reach my goal.
I am going to be doing suggestions from people so if you have one just comment and I will try my best to do it.
So enough about that...
Onto the story
(The tilted is when I talk unless it's their POV quick detail)
"Come on Lui it's going to be fun" Valt said while trying to drag Lui from the living room.
"I already said no Valt for the hundredths time I'm not going to some stupid Halloween party" Lui said angrily.
"You don't even know who will be there" valt said.
"Ok then tell me every person going to be there and I mean everybody" Lui said sarcastically.
"Ok here goes nothing.
"Honcho, Silas,Free,Shu,Dante,Aiger,Ken,Daigo,Wakiya,Fubuki,Suoh,Lane,Hyuga,Hikaru,Bell,Bashura, Phi,Hyde,Cuza,Clio,Kitt,Xander,Norman,Theodore, Laban,Ben,and finally Gabe.
"Eh WHAT THATS 27 people plus me and you which is 29 that's so much I can't go" Lui said in shock with wide eyes.
"It's ok Lui I'll be with you by your side" Valt said calmly.
"Ok only if you PROMISE me that you'll stay ok" lui said
" of course you can count on me"
*At the party*
"Hey Shu" valt said while running to Shu.
"Hi baby" Shu said while kissing Valt as Valt landed in his arms.
"Hey Lui didn't expect you to show up" cuza said while giving clio a piggy back ride.
"Oh hey cu- why are you giving him a ride" Lui asked confused.
"We made a bet if I win he has to ride me but if he win I have to have a piggy back ride, and as you can see I lost so no ride from him" Cuza said while he sarcastically sad.
"OWWW what was that for Clio" Cuza said after slapped his cheek.
"That's for telling our business so no more rides for 2 days" Clio said while being upset
"No come on I'm sorry how can I make it up to you" Cuza said
*whispering in Cuza ear*
*cuza looks back in embarrassment*
"Clio what did you say to him" lui said wanting to know.
"I'll tell you when I'm done" Clio said while laughing has they were walking to the left to wear the bedrooms were.
"Ok maybe I don't want to know" Lui said while laughing.
"Yo Lui over here" Valt shouted while waving his hand.
(Valt was sitting at the Couch with Silas, Shu and Rantaro
"Hi va-"
*lui POV*
Why is Valt making out with Shu in a blue maids dress. And why is the dress so short.
"Um hi Valt why are you wearing that"
"Oh you know thought I would do something nice to pleasure my master" Valt said while kissing Shu again.
*whipsering*
"Come on Valt let's go do something fun i have something new you might like"
"Ok" Valt said while blushing like a strawberry"
Shu carried Valt bridal style as they went to the bedrooms just like Cuza and Clio
"Really this happens every time we bring them to something like this" Silas said angry
"Why would you like to do something like that to? Rantaro whisper in Silas ears which sent shivers down silases back.
"Sure but only if I'm top"
Silas said while running to the bedrooms
"Oh it's on" Rantaro said chasing Silas
"You have got to be kidding me" lui said frustrated
Lui felt someone rap their arms around his waist has they pulled his but close to their bulge
"WHAT TH-
"Shhhhh you don't want people to hear you" Free said while closing Luis mouth with his hand.
"Come on one hungry and you look good"
Lui said nothing as he blushed. Free picked him up bridal style and walked to the rooms where the others had gone off to. Free opened his door and went inside while still holding Lui. Before Free could even close the door Free started to French kiss Lui
"Free wait at least close the door I don't want people seeing" Lui said
"So what Lui all your friends are just has horny and don't care if they do it with the door open or in public" Free said has he close the door.
Has soon has he turned around Lui was running to the bedroom. Free caught and tossed him on the bed and started devouring his neck and collarbone, Lui was a horny,moaning,drooling mess,
With out realizing Lui said...
Free more~ I need more~
Free was taken aback a at what lui just said but he was down for anything
"Lui which method do you want edging or going all in one go" free said while smirking
"Um I think edging sounds fun" Lui said innocently.
"Oh trust me babe it's sure it"
Smirking Free said.
At that moment Free took of all of his clothes and undressed lui. He wanted to start now but he didn't want to hurt Lui so he get some lube from his side table to prep him. He put lube on his fingers and then...
Ahhh~~
Luis POV
What is this feeling I like it, it hurts but in a good way
Mhmmm~
Lui was just feeling himself was about to climax but then...
"Free~~ I'm g~ go~ going to come~~" Lui said while moaning
Just as Lui was about to feel himself climaxing Free stopped
"Free why did you stop I was so close" lui said disappointed
"You said you liked edging so this is what it is, you drive someone or yourself to the brink of climaxing and you stop until you feel like you can let it all out" Free said
"That's nice I guess, so when are you going to-
Before Lui could finish his sentence Free entered him wish full force making a clap sound
Lui scream in agony as Free didn't give him anytime to adjust. Free looked done at Lui when Free saw a tears running down his cheeks
"Are you ok Lui? Asked Free
"No *sniffle* you just went full force need I remind you I'm a virgin so as you can imagine that felt like hell" Lui screamed
"Sorry I wasn't thinking" Free apologized
"It's fine I'm getting used to it now, so can we continue daddy~
Free didn't hesitate to start up again this time used less force making it easier for Lui, lui started to moan very loudly and once again free stoped
"You know Free I'm not sure I like this edging thing, every time you stop it's hurts and it throbs" Lui said
"That's the whole point Lui" Free said laughing
Free began thrusting with even more power. Lui realized that Fares wasn't stopping and he was getting ready to burst, just then Free came screaming Lui name, Lui came couple seconds later moaning Free name
"Hey lui want to take a shower to clean off" free said softly
"Sure" Lui said
As Lui tired to get up his whole body hurt and was to weak to get up let alone move
"Owww fuck" lui complained
"What's wrong baby" free said concerned
"My whole fucking body hurts thanks to you how am I supposed to get up and shower I can't even move my legs" Lui said angrily
"Want me to carry you?
"That would be most helpful" Lui said
Free went to turn on the shower as he was getting their towels and clothes ready. He went back to the room and picked up Lui bridal style trying to be as gentle as possible. They were in the shower as Lui was hanging on free chest trying not to move.
"What's so funny" Lui said while holding frees chest
"Oh nothing just you holding me pretty tight" free said while giggling
"Yeah cause you went to hard this time" lui screamed
"Not my fault you looked so cute" free said while smiling
"I'm not cute" lui said upset
"Yes you are. no more arguing let's get out" free said while picking up Lui by his armpits to take him out.
Free rapped Lui in his towel drying him off, he put on his towel and picked up Lui bridal style to the bedroom where there clothes were. Free got dressed and help Lui get dressed. They both got into bed after free changed the sheets. Free laid down and pulled Lui to his chest rapping his arms around Luis whole body holding him tight
"Free your holding me to tight" Lui said
"Oh sorry" free said
"It's okay" lui said
I love you Lui
I love you to free
As they said that they both hugged each other drifting off the dream land
Hoped you enjoyed
Any suggestions you have for me to do or any ships?
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RomanceI was in inspired by #NewgateDLea Beyblade burst yaoi so I decided to make my own but useing inspiration from her, ( she makes amazing stuff definitely recommend if you ship those characters)
