The Note

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I sat by the large window at Cafe Noir, my fingers absently tracing the rim of my coffee cup. The soft hum of the café, with its gentle chatter and the aroma of freshly brewed coffee, provided the perfect backdrop for my writing. I had claimed my usual corner, a quiet nook away from the bustle, where I could let my thoughts flow uninterrupted.

Ding.

The chime of the door opening pulled me from my reverie. I looked up, and there she was—a girl with long, dark hair cascading over her shoulders. Her presence seemed to brighten the dim, cozy café. There was something compelling about her, a quiet confidence that made the rest of the world seem to fade away.

"I'll have a cappuccino, please," she said, her voice soft yet firm as she placed her order at the counter.

I watched her, entranced. I couldn't quite explain why, but something about her held my attention. I tried to refocus on my writing, but the words on the page suddenly felt insignificant compared to her.

"Hello," a voice startled me.

I looked up to find her standing beside my table, a gentle smile on her lips.

"Mind if I sit here?" she asked, gesturing to the empty chair across from me.

I blinked, momentarily caught off guard. "Uh, sure," I replied, clearing some space. I felt a bit flustered but intrigued.

As she settled into the chair, her gaze fell on my open notebook. "You like writing?" she asked.

"Pretty much," I said, feeling a bit self-conscious under her curious stare.

She leaned in, clearly interested. "What are you writing about?"

I hesitated for a moment. There was something about her openness that made me want to share. "A story. Just something I'm working on—nothing too serious."

She smiled, her enthusiasm palpable. "Can I hear about it?"

We began to talk. I found myself explaining the premise of my story, my words flowing more easily than they ever had. Maybe it was the warmth of the café or the way her eyes lit up as I spoke, but the conversation felt effortless.

She told me she was a student on a break, enjoying a few weeks of freedom before returning to her studies. She shared her own ideas, offering insightful suggestions on how my story could develop. I was surprised by her depth of thought. She had a way of thinking that truly intrigued me, and I found myself more captivated by her insights than by the story itself.

Time seemed to pass quickly. The once-bustling café had grown quieter as the afternoon sun began its descent.

Ring ring ring.

The sharp ring of her phone jolted me from my thoughts. She answered it quickly, her voice shifting from warm to hurried. "I'm coming now," she said before hanging up and starting to gather her things.

"I have to go," she said, standing up abruptly.

I nodded, feeling a pang of disappointment. Our conversation had been so engaging. Before she left, she scribbled something on a napkin and left it on the table.

"Here," she said with a smile, then turned and walked out of the café.

I stared at the note she left behind—her phone number written neatly. Beneath the number was a single name: Jade.

"Hmmm, Jade..." I murmured to myself, a small smile tugging at my lips. There was something about this encounter that felt like the beginning of something unexpected.

After she left, the café felt a little emptier. The gentle clinks of cups, the murmur of conversations around me—it was all still there, but somehow quieter, as if the room had shifted in her absence. I glanced down at the napkin she had left, tucked safely in my pocket now. The paper was crisp, and I could feel its edges under my fingers, almost like it carried some secret weight.

I stepped out of the café, letting the cool evening air wash over me. The streets were bathed in the soft glow of fading sunlight, and the city, in that moment, seemed to breathe with a different rhythm. The usual hustle was still there—cars humming by, people walking briskly, wrapped in their own little worlds—but there was a calmness I hadn't noticed earlier.

I had thought about taking the train, the station just a few minutes away, but something made me pause. The walk home felt more appealing now, like I needed to stretch my legs and let the world fill my senses.

The streets felt alive, not just with movement but with the subtle things: the faint smell of freshly baked bread wafting from a corner bakery, the distant laughter of children playing near a park, the rustling of leaves in the breeze. My shoes tapped lightly on the sidewalk, a steady rhythm that grounded me as I passed by rows of small shops, their lights flickering on as evening settled in.

It was one of those nights where the air felt crisp but not biting, the kind that made the skin tingle with the leftover warmth of the day. I watched as the colors of the sunset deepened—orange fading into pink, pink bleeding into purple, and finally, a soft, velvet blue that began to blanket the sky.

The city was familiar, yet tonight it seemed different. Every detail felt sharper—the neon signs flickering in the distance, the soft glow of streetlights that lined the roads, the way shadows stretched long and lean as the night crept in. It was peaceful in a way that let my mind wander, but not far enough to escape the thoughts creeping in from earlier.

When I arrived home, the familiar warmth of family life greeted me at the door. The sound of the television hummed faintly in the living room, overlapping with laughter coming from the kitchen. The scent of something cooking drifted through the house—spices and warmth mixing into the comfort of home.

I kicked off my shoes and wandered into the kitchen where my mom was stirring a pot on the stove. "You're back late," she said with a quick glance and a smile. "Hope you didn't forget about dinner."

"Wouldn't miss it," I replied, leaning against the counter as she continued to cook. My younger sister was at the table, her schoolbooks spread out in front of her, pretending to study but clearly distracted by her phone. The usual chaos of home life surrounded me, and yet, I felt oddly distant from it tonight.

After a quick dinner, I retreated to my room, closing the door behind me. It was quiet now, the noise of the house muffled by the walls. My desk was cluttered with notebooks and pens, a window open to let in the cool night breeze. I stood by the window for a moment, staring out into the night, watching as the sky deepened to a darker blue, almost black, with stars beginning to peek through.

As I sat down at my desk, I found myself unable to focus on the story I had been writing earlier. My thoughts kept circling back to the café, to the conversation, to the girl who had appeared so unexpectedly and left just as quickly. I hadn't even known her name until she left it behind, scribbled on a napkin. And now, I couldn't stop thinking about her.

There was something about the way she had looked at me—curiosity, perhaps, or maybe just a passing interest. But it lingered. Her voice, the way she had leaned in when I spoke, the light in her eyes when she offered her own ideas about the story I was writing—it was all still so vivid in my mind, as if the conversation hadn't ended but had only paused, waiting for me to pick it up again.

I reached into my pocket, pulling out the napkin, her number and name still there, inked in neat, careful handwriting. I stared at it for a while, feeling the weight of possibility hanging in the air. Was this just a fleeting moment, something that would fade with time? Or was it the start of something more?

I placed the napkin on my desk, staring at it one last time before turning off the light and slipping into bed.

The world outside had quieted now, the night fully settled, and yet sleep felt far away.

The next day, I found myself back at Café Noir, settling into my usual spot by the window. The day was much like the one before, the same soft hum of voices and clinking cups filling the air, but my mind wasn't on the writing today.

I sat there for a while, the napkin tucked in my pocket, almost forgotten until I pulled it out again, staring at her name and the number beneath it. I tapped the edge of my phone against the table, debating with myself, wondering if I should make the call.

Just as I started to dial the number, the door chimed, and my breath caught in my throat. I looked up, and there she was.

Jade.

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