Phonophobia [RE-WRITTEN & EDITED] 📗

DISCLAIMER.

I love you all!

WARNING

    This book will contain smut, mentions of abuse, foul language, and triggering scenes. Please read at your risk.

    Though this is the rewritten version in which I have explained the plot better and corrected most of my grammar, a lot of the scenes will be straight from the original work.

    Also, I'm sorry but y'all can imagine their ages however you want, okay, it's perfectly normal to do that but I'm not going to change the fact that Payne has a fetus. It changes the whole damn plot if I do. What I can do though is adjust the age gap a bit for those who feel like the world is crashing over a 15-year age gap.

    Again, I am aware that pink eyes only occur in rare cases of albinism. Yes, I know😑. But Abigail isn't an albino, and I want her to have pinkish-gray eyes. I know it's not 'realistic' but this is a book for crying out loud, the impossible is the norm around here.

    For the people just coming across this book, I hope you love it! 

    I appreciate all of you for taking the time to check out my book🦋💖.

What's Different.

The Character's back story will be strongly highlighted and more meaning will be added to Laces' and Payne's relationship.

Important details will be added to make the story more detailed and tolerable.

Castillo Bychkov and Andrea will have more significance in the story.

And finally, my grammar should be okay this time around, with fewer mistakes and cringe driven moments. (Can't make any promises on the last one though.)

What You Shouldn't Expect.

Perfection.

I don't think I can say this enough but, I can't be perfect, nobody is. I'll try to pull off whatever I can for those who are interested but don't come for me if my English doesn't satisfy you.

It's really not my first language. I speak English as a second language and at times it can be really hard for me to write what I envision perfectly in my head.

Also, I would not expect everything to be the same as in the last book if I were you. A lot of stuff will change here too.

Will The Original Still Be Up?

Tbh, I don't think anyone would want to go through all that horror and all, but there will be added chapters in this version and some chapters from the original will be added here so...

I will leave it hanging there for some people who would love to relive the cringe and for those who would love to voice their opinions.

Originally, I was going to rewrite the book and change the name to; Cookies, Tarts, and All the Men Involved, because I was out of my damn mind at some point and I'd even started publishing it back in 2023, but I've come back to my senses and decided against the idea. 😀

Anyway, the original title feels more meaningful so here is again, refurbished.

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I know this might not be the best book and, I hope you understand that not everyone is incredibly talented. 🙃

Please enjoy this version of the book and in the meantime, I will also focus on my soul-sucking university life and the other books I'm writing.

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CHARACTERS.

Abigail Todaro - 23

Christian Lonsdale - 37

Orianna Lonsdale - 15

Gregory Weston - 26

Alexander -24

Derrick - 8

Vera Lewis - 27

Theodore Lonsdale - 34

P.S: I'm just noticing that I never gave Alexander and Derrick surnames wtf?! Recommendations?

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Maryam M. B. 🖋 

 I'll update this weekly or twice a week.