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Congratulations to all the winners of my 2024 September Writing Challenge!
You all wrote amazing stories in such a limited time! It was difficult to choose be...
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Relevance to the Prompt: Prompt #1 | The story features a letter from the future that alters the protagonist's life.
Writing Quality: The writing is heartfelt and raw, tackling sensitive topics like suicide and mental health. The emotions are powerfully conveyed, although the pacing in some parts could be improved. Use of Filipino and English in the dialogue adds authenticity.
Creativity: The concept of writing a suicide note and then receiving a letter from the future self is creative and impactful. The idea of one's future self intervening is unique and deeply emotional.
Overall Lesson: The story emphasizes the importance of self-love, hope, and perseverance. It teaches that even in the darkest moments, holding on can lead to a brighter future. The protagonist learns that she is stronger than she believes, and that her life is worth living.
Rating: 4 Stars | The story is emotionally powerful, creative, and relevant to the prompt. Minor pacing improvements could elevate the story further, but overall, it is an excellent short piece.
