Citizen Brown

Ch 1

As Doc, Marty, and Einstein were getting ready to leave 1931 again, the youngest McFly turned to the scientist.

Marty asked, "Sowing oats...is that going on with you and Edna?"

Doc was confused, "What are you talking about?"

Marty explained, "Emmett and Edna...they are going to see Frankenstein together."

True to his word, Emmett and Edna were almost at the theater.

Doc muttered, "That's odd..."

Doc brought out his Frankenstein stub that he always carried with him and paled. It was starting to fade out of existence. Shit.

"Great Scott!" Doc finally managed to say.

Marty turned to him and asked, "What?"

Emmett had gotten to a couple and started to talk to them. They were in line for tickets. Edna looked disgusted and walked off. Emmett went after her as they took each other's hands. They smiled at each other.

Doc tried to warn, "We've got to get back in..."

The De Lorean was already preparing to go back to the future.

Doc started to say, "Stop the car! This could be disastrous for everyone..."

Marty tried to turn the De Lorean but it was of no use, they were starting to go back to the future.

Marty cried out, "Doc!"

...

The next thing Marty knew, the De Lorean had arrived back in 1986. It was so out of control, going this way and the other. Marty screamed, just barely avoiding the sign for Hill Valley in four miles. The De Lorean finally crashed through a billboard. Marty rubbed his neck, groaning. That's when he noticed something. Doc and Einstein weren't in the car.

Marty wondered, "Where'd you go, Doc?"

"RELAX!"

The sudden voice of what sounded like Doc startled Marty.

"WE'VE GOT EVERYTHING UNDER CONTROL!"

Marty took a look at the billboard and saw a balder version of Doc on it, calling him First Citizen Brown. "Doc?" He asked.

The sign read, 'Welcome to Hill Valley. Relax...we've got everything under control.'

A girl who looked to be Marty's age was picking up litter with headphones on, rocking to some music. She had brown braided hair, blue eyes, her fingernails were painted red, wearing a red blouse with a black motorcycle jacket, an orange undershirt, silver earrings, a golden medallion, black pants that are torn at the knee, and white shoes. It was Annie. She didn't even notice that Marty had crashed.

Marty saw her from behind, not realizing that it was Annie. He honked a few times to get her attention. Annie took off the headphones as she finally heard the honking. She turned around and saw the situation Marty had gotten himself in.

She walked over to him a bit surprised, "Martin?!"

Marty opened the window as he did a double take, "Annie?!"

Annie semi joked, "Well, I ain't the Tooth Fairy."

Marty pulled out the picture of them from a dance but there was only Marty in the photo. Aw hell. What was going on?

Marty rolled his eyes a bit annoyed, "Whatever, can you help me down?"

Annie raised a brow, "What the hell are you doing in a De Lorean anyhow?"

Marty did a double take, "Wait - do you not recognize the time machine?"

Annie chuckled a bit dryly, "That ain't a time machine, Martin. And if it is, whoever made it, has to have their eyes checked."

Marty smiled a bit, "That's exactly what we said whenever Doc showed off to us. And when did you get so snarky?"

Annie replied, "When you crashed that thing into the billboard."

The youngest McFly shook his head, "Never mind that now! Just give me a hand!"

The girl sarcastically coldly replied, "You won't like where I would put it."

Marty asked, "Can you tell me what's the date?"

Annie answered, "Last I checked, I should be asking you that. You probably wrecked your head. Though I probably wouldn't get that lucky."

Marty insisted, "What is the date, Annie?"

Annie rolled her eyes, "The fifteenth of May, 1986."

Marty was panicking, "Oh man, oh man! This can't be happening."

Annie semi joked, "I don't know, I kinda like the change."

Marty perked up, "Speaking of which, you have too."

Annie raised a brow but decided to play it off, "Uh that's the idea? I'm just fed up honestly."

Marty agreed, "That makes two of us."

Annie defended, "Don't group me together with you, dork."

Marty commented, "I think I should figure out a way down."

Annie sarcastically replied, "First good idea you've had in awhile."

Marty asked, "What are you doing anyhow?"

Annie answered, "Not that you care but I'm doing my work, unlike some people. What's the technical term for attempting to jump your De Lorean through a billboard? Sounds worse than getting stuck in the library for hours. By the way, where did you even get that thing? Did you steal it?"

Marty was fed up, "You really don't recognise the time machine?"

Annie shot, "There's no such thing as time travel, goofus."

Marty changed the subject as he questioned, "I jump but I would break my neck. The door is jammed, can you get it open?"

Annie explained, "I can't get up there and you know it. And besides, it might fall on me asshole."

Marty then asked, "Do you have any rope to toss up to me?"

Annie replied, "No but I have a tire iron I found."

Marty responded, "I think that'll do. Toss it here."

Annie rolled her eyes, "Fine, you can have it. But you better have something cool for it." She tossed it up to him, allowing him to catch the tire iron. Marty then tossed down the flask that Kid Tannen had. She read it, "Irving 'Kid' Tannen. The gangster? Where the hell did you get this?"

Marty admitted, "You wouldn't believe me anyhow."

Annie had a sip of whatever was in the flask as Marty used the tire iron to break the glass. Marty grabbed the journal and climbed himself down. Annie got in her golf cart.

She told him coldly, "Well, I did my good deed for the day. I'm off before you rub off of me. Though I don't know how you are going to get the car down. Props for stickin' it to the Big Brother."

Marty started to say, "Wait Annie, please..."

Annie drove off, "I'm not letting this sudden bit distract me, Martin. I'll see you later, square."

With that, she went back into Hill Valley, the gates closing right in front of his face.

Marty wondered, "She thinks I'm a square...? What the hell happened here?" Marty rubbed the back of his neck, "Geez this can't get any worse..."

Just as soon as he said that, the De Lorean shook itself out of the billboard and crashed on the ground. As soon as it did, Marty was near tears. This mission was going to be very hard. No Einstein. No Doc. And worst off, no Annie. She existed but it seemed for whatever reason - she thought he was a square. Marty kicked one of the floating tires. He wounded up on his butt.

Marty said, "Doc, I could really use your help right now... Everything here is so messed up..."

"RELAX! WE'VE GOT EVERYTHING UNDER CONTROL!"

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Wishmaker1028: I wouldn't call that under control, Doc. But yeah, the changes in this section are going to be felt extremely. Remember how I said in Get Tannen it was going to get dark? Well, you will see what I mean soon. For now, please read and review! And always think outside of the box!