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This is pretty much a story I wrote for school .Tell me what you think about this story please should i continue writing it or am I wasting my time .Criticism is encouraged , just don't be harsh. I own all characters in this story , well most of them my friend owns some too. anyway on with the story !!!!!! DONT FOGET TO VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!

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prologue

Kagurla was in a council meeting scanning the crowd for the very rich and handsome Count  Disarray . Disarray had discovered many vaccines to diseases that were invading my country. " I'm bored and I'm leaving , goodbye", I said after my fruitless attempt of finding Disarray. As I was walking out a noise erupted , knowing no one would say anything about me leaving - unless they had a death wish - so I turned around to see what happened and to my suprise I saw Disarray coming after me . I hardly kept my excitement in.  When  he caught up I told my guards that followed my constantly to leave, shock clearly showed on their faces ,but they  dare  not disobey my order. I could feel myself quivering on the inside but as always on the oiutside I was calm  , cool  ,and collected ,even though I was sure I was suffering from delirium . "Hi", he said.

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⏰ Last updated: Jun 01, 2011 ⏰

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