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Review A well-written story. The plot was simple yet beautifully crafted, with no noticeable plot holes. The story flows smoothly, with a great theme and spot-on character development. There’s nothing lacking in the story as such. From the start, a suspense builds around Jimin’s secret, making you wonder what will happen when Jungkook finds out. Other twists also make the story very engaging.
The only thing I couldn’t understand was how Jimin forgave so quickly. No matter how kind-hearted or big-hearted someone is, the struggles Jimin faced aren’t something a normal person would forgive so easily. Then, Mr. Jeon also forgave too soon, which felt awkward to me. Later, the story became a bit boring for me in the middle because Jimin’s character was only portrayed as forgiving, enduring everything silently. Another thing I found strange was that Mr. Jeon didn’t do anything to make Jimin capable or achieve something on his own. Knowing that Jungkook might not react well if he found out, Mr. Jeon still didn’t do anything for Jimin’s safety. These are just my concerns.
Overall, it’s a great story. Don’t judge it solely based on my opinion; read it yourself and form your own. I really liked the story, and the writer did a fantastic job with the ending.
