Holy moly this book is going to be a good one! I really love the narrator points in the story. Usually I would not enjoy a annoying narrator constantly poking in but not with this story. The transition from the story to narrator is clear and clean, definitely nicely adapted. I am excited for the rest of the story keep adding to it!
Book review!
Spelling- 10pts
Format- 10pts
Pictures- 5pts
Genre-10pts
Creativity-40pts
Cover- 7pts
Overall your score is......... 82/100! Witch is a great score. If your wondering why I deducted points from the cover section is because the cover doesn't say "read me I'm interesting" it gives more of a bland basic anime story, and its missing your name and title. I also deducted some points for the pictures because they were just two photos of the same gal. But that dose not mean your book has no future! I think with a few adjustments it would be perfect!
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