Hey guys this is my first story I've been a serial reader but I decided to give writing a shot..
So here goesShe had just come out of the photo shoot she was exhausted in her head she was going to take a nice long bath. She covered her red hair and bowed as if she was worshipping in church and she sneaked out of the studio but she couldn't escape the paparazzi. She was known all over the city who could dare miss her. She ran into her limo where she met her best friend, Butler George,"One day I have to get away from all this fame, " she told him but he said ," They think you are every dream of theirs and frankly, you are," he added since he had known her since childhood.
She then stopped the limo she was dropped off at a nearby street. She had a glittering dress that revealed her hour glass figure. Her face is oval ,has blood red lips and a sharp pointed nose. She was approached by a gang of men, when she saw this she knew what these muscular dark(as in not visible) men wanted. TURNING the other way she saw three more of them.
They pinned her down and tore off their clothes along with her's she was so scared she screamed as they laughed.
A man then appeared out of God's grace and told them to stop and they did. She was so shocked but never said a word. The man removed his coat and gave it to her.
" Hello you must be scared but I will help you I'm their leader but I know you know you can trust me, my name is Adrian Mast,what is yours?" He asked.
She felt that she was wrong to talk to him much less trust him with her identity.
" My name is Karen Goggles, " I replied. He gave her his hand and she took it and that right there was the beginning of the end of her perfection.I know this was a short one but the next chapter will be way longer
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