The Phoenix, embraced the shadows to protect his country. His true identity remained hidden for years, serving as a covert weapon against unseen threats. But when a teenager's life hangs in the balance, the man faces an impossible choice: to protect...
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Abhi could not stop smiling. Every time he saw the rakhi in his head, a foolish grin spread across his face. Ash had chosen the same Raakhi's for all four of her brothers, but his was still a little special. There was nothing different, but Ash had added a Rudrakh in his raakhi. She told him that it was because he kept chasing trouble. She wanted him to remain safe, always.
Andy took a big bite of an apple as his sister repeated the ceremony with Arjun and Maan. He was already famished. He was waiting for the ceremony to finish so that they could all have breakfast. Abhi grabbed the apple from his hands and put it away. "Di ne abhi tak kuch nahi khaya. (Di has not eaten anything yet.)" Abhi hissed at him.
Andy rolled his eyes. If he waited until Ash was done he would die of hunger. He barely ate anything the day before. Now his stomach was protesting.
Aakaksha grabbed the apple back and handed it to Andy. "It's okay, Abhi. Let your Big-B eat. He needs to go back to work."
Andy happily reached for the apple. Only Aakaksha could put the brat in line.
"After you are done, come to the living room, we will finish the ceremony."
"What is more to do?" Andy looked confused.
"You di is done, bachcha. I am not. It's my turn now."
Andy's eyes widened in surprise. He had not accounted for it at all. She was his Bhabhi, he did not think she would want to celebrate with them. Andy waited until Aakanksha walked out of the kitchen and then looked at Abhi. "Did you get her anything?"
