Reviewed by: sapphire_seas
Book name: Fangs and Fates.
Author: BookLover3062 / Ava
Note: This review contains spoilers.
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Title; 5/10
*The title is relevant to the story, but using a word more associated with the actual creatures in the book would improve it. (Since 'fangs' would usually give the impression that the story is about vampires, whereas it's about werewolves.)
Cover; 3/10
*It bears almost no relevance as far as I can see, the image is very dull and dark, and can't really be made out.
Blurb; 6/10
*The blurb is quite well written and intriguing, however it ends too abruptly, leaving the reader
confused. Try easing into the switching subjects.
Plot/Pacing; 7/10
*The plot so far has been interesting and well paced. It's not going too fast, but is also not a bore. The lost points are for a bit too much information dumping.
Creativity/Originality; 8/10
Main Character; 5/10
*While the main character has a good sense of humour, she seems a bit pick-me to me (no one likes a pick me)and careless regarding her own wellbeing. While this is the character of some people, this trait is in opposition to her other characteristics.
Grammar; 6/10
*Try not to use too much slang. Write out the whole word; it makes the book more immersive and narrative.
Enjoyableness; 8/10
*Though she could use some work, Raven is a likable character who could grow on me. The plot is original, there's no mating stuff, (and for that, I'm truly grateful. Not a fan of werewolf romance 😭.) and her fate-related goal is interesting. If you simply adjust some things, and maybe explain things as they come, not overwhelming the reader with too much info, I really think your story could be compelling and original.
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