She Knows - A Maze Runner Fanfiction

The Box

I woke up in a dark space that felt like an elevator. Up. Up. Up. Then... It stopped. And then I realized I didn't have clothes on.
A small sliver of light came in through the ceiling, as if it was opened... and a thought flew through my mind. And out my mouth.
"DON'T COME IN!!"
A boy's voice replied in a British accent, "What the bloody hell do you mean don't - wait."
"What?" I said impatiently.
"Are you... A girl?"
"Well, judging by the fact I don't have clothes on and I have breasts I'm guessing so!" I shouted back.
"You don't have any clothes?" This came from a different voice, with no accent.
"Minho, shut up. And don't get any ideas." Said the first voice.
"Still don't have any clothes!"
"Oh! Umm... One second." The voice got quieter as if the boy had turned away. "Hey, you! Get some of the smallest clothes you can find!"
"In the meantime, do you have a bed sheet or towel or something I can cover myself with?"
"Yeah, here you go." A third voice said.
"Thanks," I adjust the towel so it cover everything. "Okay, you can open the top now!"
Light flooded the room. I saw several boys leaning down from above the crate I was in, but no girls. I scanned the faces and didn't see anyone you knew until... "Gally!?"
"L-Lauren?!"
A memory came sweeping into my head.

"Gally, no!" I screamed, as uniformed men held me back.
"Don't worry, Lauren, I will find you!" Gally was being dragged away from me.
"I know, Gally! I trust you!"
"I love you!"
"I love you too!"
I screamed as a metal door slammed between the two of you, brother and sister.

"Gally, you found me!"
"I will always find you."

So... First part! Tell me what you think! Comment all thoughts! Criticism is welcome!
Love, Itsneveralways