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He could feel the burning slash of the whip as it cut through the flesh on his back. The chains holding him up rattling as he feel foreward from the force.  The metallic scent of blood surrounded the cellar. The wielder of the whip gave no sign of emotion to the wimpers being release. As he made the whip once again sail through the air. A sadistic grin coming to his face.

I get random thought and have a very active imagination so I figured I could put it in this book. Thoughts?

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