Currently Titled (But any cooler ideas giving for a title will be taken into consideration and best title can be the title to my book - got to be cooler than mines though :D-.)
Also in this story I do a lot of flashbacks and in the story, in every beggining chapter it starts of with the present. Then it goes back into the past and so on, only until it reaches the middle of the story can you fully understand Damien's past. Also I have plans on make a second story to this and it will be in Dimitri's point of view and during his childhood, basically what made him become who he is in this story. :D
P.S. I also tend to change the point of view as well during the story cause I wanted readers to understand things also from others' point of view, because Damien's view point can be a little biased sometimes. And also because I get bored of writing in Damien's point of view at times so I spice it up with someone else's. When I change the point of view, and also if I skip ahead of time it'll be usually be two spaces away (for skipping ahead in time) and a two space with .......... in between them. So hope that will help with my writing if you don't get it just comment. Or if you having any questions on Lights and that sort of stuff just continue reading the story it'll tell you later or ask me. Thanks.
P.S.S I am pretty sure there is going to be some grammatical errors in my story because this is a draft of it and perfecting every word would take forever. So sorry if there are grammatical errors. :D
Chapter 1: Without Hope (part 1)
Chapter 1: Without Hope (part 2)
Chapter 2: Survivors (part 1)
Chaptter 2: Survivors (part 2)
Chapter 3: No title yet
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Darkness Ahead
Teen FictionIt all seemed so surreal, like a sick twisted dream that he couldn't wake up from. But lucky him, this was no nightmare. "I failed you..." The words felt thick in his mouth and he let out a gut-wrenching sob. "I am truly sorry Jade." Damien whispere...
