Review: 89/100
Summery: When a thief breaks into a seemingly abandoned house to steal some loot, he is brought to an erie feeling about it. And when he goes into the basement, what he finds will put truly test him.
Review: Without spoiling it, this story is brilliant, gross, and disturbing at the same time. Like String Theory it's short and to the point where everything falls smoothly and into place. The character is fleshed out quickly and truly makes you root for him to live as he is trust into this unsettling situation. It's a good story with a decent twist. However, the blood and gore part of the story seems to be pushed in too quickly.
Recommend?
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The Intrusion is a nice short horror story with many to offer, but what it gives you towards the end really seems a bit laughable.
All credit goes to the author.
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