chapter one : the party that started it all
Dynalee's POV
"no come on i dont wanna go" i say. " Dyna you have to go if not Jose will never know you really like him" my best friend says to me. " But lorehiza what if he doesnt like me or how am i gunna look hot...like i have no expertese in that!" ...then she smiles like the grinch who stole christmas and says "Thats why im here!". then in defeat i say "Fine." while i grab for my towel to take a quick shower....when im done Lorehiza has already picked out my clothes which are:
*a black lace bra
*pink thong
* really tight grey party dress
*black high heels
then i ask "am i really wearing that?!" and she says with a smirk plastered on her face "oh yea doll face." when im done getting dressed i look at my self in the mirror quite surprised and say "wow you did a good job, it makes me look like i have all the curvs in the right places" and she laughs " haha thanks but honey you do, now its time for make up". After thirty minutes of make up she finishes and makes me look at myself. i barely recognized myself, i just looked so different, i have never had a smokey eye on me and now that i see it i love it then i say to Lorehiza " Omg what would i do with out you!!" and hug her. then she says " ok lets go before we are late" ...i grab my keys and leave and i arrive at Jose's house in fifteen minutes and when i parked i started to get nervous and Lorehiza said " girl dont worry , he would be a fool if he didnt notice you."... it made me relax a little. So as we walked towards his house i can feel the vibrations of the music blasting from inside, and as we walk up the porch a couple is making out there like if no one was there. Lorehiza laughs to herself and tells me " I bet your going to end up like that before the party is over." then i smirk at her and say " Same with you, Blake is going to be all over you, do you have a condom in your purse because i dont wanna be an aunt before highschool is over." and she laughs and says "yes and you?" and i gave her a brief nod. A second later Blake opens up the door and says " Ladies i thought you werent gonna come, come on in!" and right after that he winks at lorehiza and she blushes furiously as he takes her by the hand and says a little embarrased " Lorehiza you look beautiful tonight" and drags her away to the jungle of the party but before she shouts out " Call me if anything happens!" then she dissapears with Blake
-i hope she will be fine- my conciounse says.... a few minutes after wandering around the crowded place with blasting music, a song caught my ear which was " i wanna" by pitbull and as it started someone caught my eye and it was Jose that just noticed me and looks at me with a little
surprisement and with his famous smirk then walks over to me and i just stay there paralyzed like a dumbass and he all of a sudden he whispers to my ear " You look tense, why dont you relax." i swear if it wasnt that there were other people i would have melted right there his voice was so sexy and seducing me i was quite embarrased to start having perverted thoughts about him, and right as he said that i immediately did as he said. After a few seconds he stood behind me the music was starting to take over and automatically my hips were starting to move to the beat as Jose held to my waist and when i felt his touch i felt electricity go through my body which made dancing with him even more intense as he started squeezing my thighs and rubbing them.... and as the song finished he took me up stairs and i was starting to get nervous and to think -omg what if i swipe my vcard..im so nervous- and then he looks back and sees my worried face and says "dont worry im not gunna try anything ,unless you want me to" and when we got to his room which was surprisingly tidy and he started saying " Dynalee you look so beautifull tonight" and in my mind i was thinking -so i was ugly before?- and my conciounce responds -you idiot he means you look even prettier now!-....then he continued saying " Dyna i have known you for so long and ive really started to like you, the way you are and everything about you....and ive been waiting all this time to ask you, Dynalee Velez Hernandez will you be my girlfriend?" i was really taken aback by his confession and my conciounce started to say - dumbass say yes but scare him a little- then i pop out my dozing out and say " well i dont know... let me think ...ummm sorry but im gunna have to say..." when i see the hurt look on his face i start smirking and burst out laughing " Of course ill say yes!!! ive always had a major crush on you." the he had this embarrased look on his face and i go up to him and take off my heels and plant a kiss on his soft full lips and he grabs my waist pulling me closer to him and as i felt our bodies get closer my heart started beating at a thousand miles an hour and started to blush like a tomatoe thank goodness it was dim so he couldnt tell and as he kept on deepening the kiss we were making our way to the bed and as he lay me on the bed my hand way going through his hair and we kept exploring our mouths and touching places where it made me feel like i was on exstacy and then i felt a bulge poking me and i dont know why but my hand automatically started rubbing it and he let out a grunt and as we were about to shed some clothes Lorehiza all of sudden barges in with Blake and when she realizes im in there with Jose she said slightly embarrased " sorry wrong room" then i pull away and say " lets save this for when we have more privacy and lets go back to the party" and he says " ok baby , lets go" and as i straighten out my clothes and fix my hair. When im done Jose all of a sudden comes from behind and whispers in my ear and says " Come on" and with a blush i go with him as he held my hand and then my conciounce tells me -im glad you didnt swipe your vcard just yet - then i mentally sigh to myself. When we reached the bottom floor Jose and i started dancing to the music for hours and just haveing a great time together and when i was going to leave with a drunk Lorehiza i told him " Call me in the morning so then you can tell blake how Lorehiza is." then i nod and give him a brief, sweet but gentle kiss and walk out and put Lorehiza in the car and drive home and then my counciounce tells me -You did it Dyna! your finally his girlfriend!... now lets hope you two last- and as i thought about it i started smiling like an idiot .... when Lorehiza and i got home i had to change her because she passed out in the car... oh boy shes going to feel it in the morning.. a few minutes later i get in to bed and feel my phone vibrate and when i check, it was a text from Jose saying -good night beautiful- and that was the last thing i saw till i dozed off to sleep thinking -man im falling for him real badly but i dont mind-.
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Lorehiza's POV
"girl dont worry, he would be a fool if he didnt notice you" i say with a genuine smile. i sense her relax a bit. We got outta the car and as we got up the poorch there was a couple making out there like if no one was there. I laughs to myself and tell Dynalee" I bet your going to end up like that before the party is over." then she smirks at me and says " Same with you, Blake is going to be all over you, do you have a condom in your purse because i dont wanna be an aunt before highschool is over." and i laugh and say "yes and you?" and she gave me a brief nod. A second later Blake opens up the door and says " Ladies i thought you werent gonna come, come on in!" and right after that he winks at me and i blush furiously as he takes me by the hand and says a little embarrased " Lorehiza you look beautiful tonight" and drags me away to the jungle of the party but before i shout out " Call me if anything happens!" then i dissapears with Blake. i felt so flattered that Blake chose to be with me tonight and when we stoped i saw all this dj gadgets and stuff and Blake told me " im being the Dj tonight." and i replied "i never knew you were the dj type, show me what you got?" then he puts on the song "i wanna" by pitbull and i say with a wink "not bad" and he asks " wanna dance?" and i say " with this kind of music, how would i not dance." and then i start swaying my hips to the beat and he follows and he starts whispering the song into my ear
" i want you, i want you
i need you, i need you
gotta have you, have you, have you, lemme tell you what i wanna do
i wanna touch ya, kiss ya, freak ya, fuck ya, lick ya, tease ya, please ya, suck ya" and right as he finished that i felt a bulge poking my behind as he danced with me and at the same time i got shivers sent down my spine by how sexy it was. When the song was over i turn around and crashed my lips on Blake and he immediately responds and we start kissing passionately as the next song plays which was " when live takes over" by david guetta and then he pulls away and says " lemme call my back up and lets go somewhere more private, ok?" then i give him a brief nod he calls his buddy and when hes done i take his hand and lead him upstairs and when i saw the fist door on the right, and when i open it i see Dynalee making out with Jose and think -haha told you so- then i say a little embarrased " sorry wrong room" then i find another larger room and go in and see Blake with a face like hes thinking ad smiling at the same time and when he realizes im staring at him he says " Lorehiza will you be my girlfriend, i know this is all sudden but i really do like you like no other girl i have dated especially Ashley" and then i told him " whoa thats alot to take in but tell you what, close your eyes and you will find out." then he does what i say and closes his eyes and i though -let me stand behind him just to scare him- then he opened his eyes and muttered "fuck she left." and right when he was going to take a step i turned him around and kiss him like it was my last kiss and i felt that he tensed up a bit but he gave in a second later then the kiss was started to heat up and right as he going to lay me on the bed Ashley pops in and starts whining "Blakey i was looking all over for you, where have you been?" i think shes saying it a little too happy for her own good . Then Blake sighs and says " Ashley im with my new girlfriend Lorehiza,and look we broke up a month ago what part of 'i dont like you and dont want to be with you ever again' dont you understand?"..i tensed up as i saw them talk Blake turned around and grabed me by my waist and said "cmon babe we have better things to do.".. and right as we passed her she was sending death glares. im actually happy those dont litterally kill you because if not i would've been dead by now... after that she looks at me with death written all over her eyes and says " this isnt over." then Blake and i both get up and leave going back to the party and we go to have some punch but it sorta had a kick and burn to it then i ignored it and kept drinking and the next thing i remember was me dancing like a stripper with blake. Then i regained my councionceness in the car with Dynalee driving and i was lating down in the back but end up passing out and i think to myself -oh im so gunna feel it in the morning-
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A/N
Well i hope you enjoyed the first chapter of my first book of "when love takes over". If you want a second chapter i want at least 30 reads and ten comments please.. tell me what you think and in what i need to improve but please dont be cruel and put mean messages... i know im not a professional but i love doing this soo please and if you see anyone els using .this story yoh must notify me please.... ps. i prefer that if you are going to pm me i prefer that you email me to dynaleeh.v90@gmail.com
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