Black and Blue

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  • Dedicated to diane and alondra
                                    

I'm more of a reader and not a writer and I wanna know if my writing is good or not. So please vote and comment to tell me if this poem is good so I'll know if i am good:)

*bubbles*

I feel black and blue. Just like the color of my heart after it got bruised. You beat me until i bled. I was foolish to believe every word you said. Yeah you hurt me bad. I don't know whether I should be sad or mad. But the hurt made me stronger. You can kill me no longer.

Was that good? i hope so vote comment and become my fan please if you want me to start writing stories.

i wanted to add two you tube links instead of one but i cant so the other song is find your love by drake

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