Mist in the mountains

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I walked out side it was cold, but the sun was shining high in the sky.The wind was lightly blowing my long blond hair to the side.I walked down the steps of my house to go exploring.My name is Jenifer, Jenifer Layne i live in the rocky mountains and love horses! Anyways! i walked over to my bike ready for my daily wonder. But this time it felt defferent! I feel like somthing is going to happen that will change every thing.I ignore the feeling and keep going, i get on my bike and start to pedle I pass a crystle blue river with salmen jumping out from time to time.A couple minutes pass when i turn a corner that leads to the mountain top.The smell of fresh grass over whelms me.I see birds flying everywhere! all around birds are chirping, flying and playing.After a while i reach the top, it is beautiful! i could see all the way to Jasper!I see the train shreek to a stop.SNAP!!!I quickly jurk my head around to see my best friend Kally and close behind her was Maggie. "what took you guys so long?"i asked" my alarm didn't go off" Maggie said with a yawn "my bikes chain fell of and I couldn't get it back on"Kally replied "well, ready to explore? it's my turn to choose where to go!"i say happily. i look around looking for a good trail, when i spot a deep dark cave.I look at it and grin"every one got there flash lights?" i ask "yup" kally says with wonder "ya why?" Maggie replies after Kally "because we, are going... in there!" i point to the cave. Kally looks at me like i am crazy and Maggie says "ummm, are you sure it looks kind of spooky!" "come on it will be fun!" i say walking to the cave with a skip in my step. i walk in the cave and turn around "see! Nothing to it just walk in and turn on your flash lights! than it wont be as scary!" Maggie and Kally look at each other and walk over.WE all turn on our flash lights and go into the deep dark cave." see! nothing to its just like that!"just then the floor collapses under our feet and we go sliding down a long slide like hill we are all screaming but then we start to feel somthing bouncing of the walls and onto our skin" what is this?"Maggie asks "I think its water!"i replie back weall look at each other and atsrt to scream again " I think i see the bottem!" Kally yells " i do to! but it looks like it's moving!" maggie screams back " I think it's wa..." we splash into deep blue water but i can't swim i slowly sink to the bottem.

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Authers note: Hey guys! i want to add another chapter but first i want to know what people think of it! so please leave a comment if you like or not but dont worry i wont take any comments saying they dont like the story to heart!

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