Redemption

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The smell of blood invades my nostrils . A hooded figure kneels next to me.

"I can't move !" . I thought panicked

"No need to struggle, your mine until you tell me what I need to know "

The raspy voice of the hooded figure begins to face away until I lose conscious.

*One Month earlier*〰

I look around trying to wrap my head around what happened to me. Liz tapped me on my shoulder.

"Jack..Jack..is anyone home"says Liz waving her hand over my face.

I come out of my haze and lock eyes with a girl that Seafoam eyes and wavy silky blonde hair that blanketed part of my face . I wanted to blow it off but her hair smelled like lavender shampoo.

"Are you ok jack" Liz looked concerned.

Every time I see her I'm stunned all I can think is.
"Wow she's beautiful " or "How did I get a girlfriend as hot as her?"

She shifts her weight on top of me, finally moving her hair off my face. I sit up and finnaly answer

"Im ok I just had a strange dream or something"

I sit up and Liz stares into my eyes and begins to play with my hair. Liz smirks

"I love your new hair cut , I wish was bold enough to dye my hair red"

I look at her and just the way the rays of light hit her made her look like a goddess .

" I dont deserve to be with you you can do better than me" I choke

Liz began tearing up, she lays her head on my chest

"I don't care I want to be with you !" Liz objects.

A tear runs down her face, I wipe it away

"Well I feel like its true why should I~" Liz cuts me off with a deep kiss. 

Her lips are soft and warm and I feel a tear roll own my cheek, she moves away

"This proves that ill never leave your side" Liz said looking deep into my eyes .

"The back seat of your car is cool and all but maybe we should go back to the house, I'm sure Nathan and Hayley  are going to murder us for taking so long to get groceries."  Liz chuckled

I agreed and moved to the front seat and started the car .

At the house〰

We looked at each other and carried the groceries inside knowing that we were about to get chewed out .

Nathan and Hayley glaring at us.
"Where have you two been!?" Hayley blurted before Nathan could get a word out.

Nathan Smith, Hayley Prescott, and Liz Walker are my best friend's since grade school. We live together in one house with three bathrooms, four bedrooms every one has a room to them selfs. I sleep in the living room and some times Liz snuggles up to me while I sleep in there .

"We went shopping" I say bringing food and groceries away .

"How does it take you 3 and a half hours to get a few groceries" Nathan said

"I don't wanna answer your questions and judgement I'm going to take a shower" Jack said

Hayley scoffed and mimiced Jack " I'm gonna take a shower "

In the shower〰

I stare at the water falling on my face it feels like a warm summer rain I close my eyes and enjoy this next to near comfort. Things began knocking around the bathroom."Who is it,Nathan if that's you again knock it off " I answer nobody speak so I ignored it but after while I fell asleep an I hear a small splash. I open my eyes to see liz naked on the opposite side of the bath. I was about to yell but liz covers my lips "shh I don't want them to know im in here" whisper liz she pulls away. "Why are you in here"" for this" liz says slowly approaches me I see her blonde silky smooth hair gleam in the light finally were face to face I see her blushing and she moves closer an kisses me I'm caught off guard. "I want us to stay together" I lift her head up "we will I promise" and I kiss her I pull away an I tell her how much i love her. I kiss her neck she lets out a soft moan. I stop "please Continue"liz says as she turns her back towards me an lifts up her hair.I hesitate but I continue I start an I get cold water and let it run down her back she shivers. She turns around she takes my hand and placed it on her chest "close your eyes" says liz I remove my hand "why" I ask "just do it please" she says.I close my eye's she grabs my hands. she places my hand on her chest i felt her heart beat."see when we are together i get flustered''. As i close my eyes images of that dream re-appear I pull away "i have something i like to talk to you about ''.As i speak she listen with horror in her eyes. I ask is she ok as i watch tear drops form in her eyes.She shakes her head "this is so unexpected i don't know what to say"liz says "well what are we supposed to do then"I ask. Liz gives me a kiss stand up an leave without saying a word. as she leaves she whispers"i will always love you".she left soon I leave.

In the living room〰

Im walking towards the kitchen drying my hair.when im in the kitchen I see Hayley her black hair shins in the light she wearing my grey sweatshirt which she stole an i don't know is she wearing anything under it.I watch her as she reaches for her glasses honestly I think she looks better with out them.she in the fridge I guess she making dinner tonight.she turns to see me leaning against the wall with a towel over my shoulder. "Oh you startled me" says hayley "my bad I was just watching"I say."well what do you want"Haley says.I stay quiet then extend my hand."what"Hayley says as she raised her eyebrow "my jacket can I have it back"I ask."no its to comfy"whines Hayley.I roll my eyes"I don't care I want it back""umm but I...um"stutteres Hayley."whats wrong I just want my jacket"I say "well its..um" Hayley says while pulling the jacket down to her knees.I get off the wall any I walk toward her I notice she blushing. I place my hand on the bottom of the jacket as I pull it up "stop" Hayley says softly.I ignore her thinking she trying to be difficult.I move it up mot paying attention I lift it up passed her stomach. I glance back an I see Hayley in shock as if something Happened.I glace down an begin to blush im frozen to what Im seeing. Im stared at Hayley in shock "Wh..Why dont u have shorts under here" I say an my view goses back to Hayley with black laced panties."what are you do..."she puts her hands over my mouth.*sighs* "please shut up" she says "what are you doing with these on tho"I ask" its none of your business"she says (soon you'll find out why she has these on). "Fine here's your dumb jacket"Hayley says in a angry tone.she pulls the jacket up an takes it of but holds it over her body.I wait then I take it but to my surprise"whats wrong with you today!"i say as im looking at Hayley chest she wearing a see through bra."you know what here I toss the jacket back "keep if on for now"I say then I leave to go to my "room"

In the bedroom〰

As I lay in my bed I keep seeing visions of that cloaked man. I keep seeing visions of my death thats all I remember.I sit up sitting on the edge of my bed.I reach for my dresser an pick up my red headphones.I take out my phone an plug it in.I lay down an listen to my music.I take out my notepad an start writing music.Two hours pass as jack lays on the bed.*knock knock*I Sit up as I here someone at my door sleep"who is it"I ask "its me" answers Nathan. "Oh come in then"

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