part one

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Before Kommissar was Kommisar, she was called Luisa. She preferred Lucy but didn't mind what everyone called her. Luisa was kind, well, used to be kind. Until the camp. Emily and her were in the same girls only school. It was a special school for talented girls who could sing like both of them could. It came around autumn time and they were on their way to an accapella camp. The girls didn't know each other. They were in the same lessons together all day everyday, but didn't know each other's names, they hadn't spoke before.

Every student lined up outside the coach with their stuff. Instead of choosing the people you would like to be in a room with, the teacher chose you a partner and you'd be roommates with them. Kinda like university. However you were aloud to sit with your person of choice on the coach. Luisa was always sat on her own. She had plenty of friends, but none of them wanted to sit with her, they always had their own specific friend they always had to sit next to. Emily was sat with Stacie, Flo and another girl named Hilda. Stacie and Flo knew Emily before they joined the Bellas and Hilday became part of DSM.

Emily and the 3 girls were sat on the back row, laughing loudly at each other being the girls they are. Emily's laugh was interrupted by the sight of Luisa sat on her own. Her elbow on the small side bar and her face slumped against her hand. Emily hated when people were alone. Or upset at all. As the caring person she is, she took the struggle to stand up on the moving coach, flying all over onto people, as she made her way 2 rows down to sit next to Luisa.

Luisa lifted her head to look at Emily, only to go back into her previous position.
"Hi, I'm Emily!" Emily said, perky.
It took Luisa about 10seconds to respond but Emily didn't mind.
"Luisa..." She sighed, but inside, she was happy that she might actually have someone to sit with. Even if it was to 'Hi' and 'Bye'.
"why are you sat on your own? Were are your friends?"
"Over there" Luisa pointed to another 3 rows ahead.
"Have they left you?!"
"No, they just prefer to sit with their other friends"
"Come and sit with us, there's an empty seat in front of us, if you sit on the one furthest from the window and twist yourself round, you can talk to us"
" A-Are you su-"
"Yes! Come on" Emily smiled.

Standing up, she let Luisa go first. The coach went round a corner and started to get fast. The two girls were falling in all directions, Emily grabbed onto Luisas waist and walked her to her seat, not letting go.
"Luisa, this is Stacie, Flo and Hilda. Stacie, Flo, Hilda this is Luisa"
They all gave her a hug and welcomed her to their friend group. After hearing about Luisas friends, they immediately hated them, only knowing Luisa for about 25 minutes.
They laughed, joked and told each other story's for the next 2 hours straight, with out getting any sleep for 8 hours on the coach. (They only go to the best accapella camps.) they occasionally got shouted at for being too loud when everyone was asleep and it was pitch black. They made room for Luisa on the back,and texted eachother so the didn't get thrown off the coach for being too noisy. But it was still hard to hold in their laughter.

When they finally got to the camp, the rooms were revealed. Luisa was put in with Emily. Which was a nice surprise for both of them. The two girls held hands,jumping up and down, squealing.

The girls grabbed their stuff and went to their rooms. It was just like a luxury 5 star hotel. Everyone was super excited. Luisa and Emily stood out side the door for a good 3 minutes before finally going in.

"Let's go!"

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