This is a new style of writing for me so please do give me some constructive criticism. I repeat CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. Thank you very much and I'm not very good at updating so I am very sorry
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Olivia's Pov
It's my first day at Charlotte high school and I'm already late. My brother Chad and I are polar opposites; Chad gets good grades, likes school, and always follows the rules while me, I'm very different; I get D's and F's, hate school, I'm not a morning person and,I almost NEVER follow rules. We just moved here and no one knows me so I decided to go for more innocent look today. I put on some Blue Jean, shorts a purple long sleeved shirt, and some light makeup; I also let my wavy hair down. I walked down the stairs and my brother gave me a weird look he said
"What's with the girly outfit and what did you do with my sister!" I just sighed ( did I mention that Chad and I are twins... but I'm older; we both have green eyes and brown wavy hair)
"No one knows me so I can start fresh don't worry I still hate school and I don't think I can keep this up for long" I reply
"All right well we are going to be late we don't leave soon so hurry up" he says
"I'm ready I'm just waiting for you!" I yell at him and with that we got into the car and drove to school.
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That was just a little bit of the story but please comment and vote and all that jazz and let me know if you like it
-Talia😊
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Slowly Turning Soft
Teen FictionThis story is about a girl named Olivia Carlton and she had been kicked out of her house for being the rebellious teen that she is. Her and her twin brother Chad moved into a new house (that her parents paid for even though they kicked Olivia out be...
