Hi this is my first story so don't kill me ,I would appreciate constructive critism. I hope u don't murder me for my errors Thanks
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Vida's POV
World known Alexander Gates just fired his p.a because she put too much sugar in his tea. I'm so nervous right now I keep on twisting my long brown hair. " Ms Davida Brown you're up next" " sorry just Vida would be fine" I'm about to go in for an interview with Mr Gates " it doesn't really matter " I'm really beginning to hate his receptionist. I go into the elevator after ten minutes of fidgeting and sighing I reach the twentieth floor. I go to his Secretary " um... Hi I'm Vida I'm here for the interview" "Oh hi I'm Andrea I'm Mr Gates Secretary go in his expecting you"" thank you" , finally I say in my mind someone is being nice. I go down the hallway until I see a door with the sign the boss I just roll my eyes typical billionaire they all so arrogant anyway I clear my head then I knock " come in" I hear a deep voice say I open the door only too come to face the sexiest man I've ever seen. looks way better than jasper why am I even thinking of him "are you coming in or not I detest slowness" I just roll my eyes " I'm sorry " then I sit."you are Davida I presume" "Vida will do sir" " good so why do u think u deserve this job"" well I'm good with numbers and I graduated in accountancy"" then why aren't you in the bank " I debate whether to tell him or not " personal reasons sir" " what might this be"" I'm sorry I cannot tell you" " then you can't have the job"" what the hell ho...how can u do that?" " earth to Vida I'm the boss"" whatever" I shout very angry now " you are a selfish bastard if u can't respect simple privacy u deserve no respect" with that I slam the door then I realize oh shit what did u just do.
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I hope u liked the first chapter can u believe Vida trust me this is going to be one hell of a book
Love Jannie
