The cold step away

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Hey guys this is my first post im gonna make it short but hope you like, if this is a sucess i will write more on to it:D-------->

The dim operation light shines over my cold, souless body. the beeping of the fact line shivers my very ears, i was dead, looking over at myself. Watching the doctors rush around my body grabing diffrent wires and plugs. Things being put in and out of my body, just to bring me back to life. The doctors shouting 1....2....3 CLEAR makes my body jolt, Everytime the word CLEAR is shouted my body jolts and the feeling in my body numbs. The third time that one word was shouted i was in a dark place being dragged back by some kind of supernatural force that over takes all of my inhibitons. A force no-one can stop alive or dead. Once the worse was over well at least i thought it was... although to most people it sound impossible but the darkness got darker and what i saw no-one should ever see...

Thanks for reading and let me know what you think, i've left it on a climax soo i can write more if you guys like:D p.s Please give me comments and improvments! BE CRITICAL!

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⏰ Last updated: Jul 04, 2011 ⏰

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