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DO NOT STEAL MY CHARACTERS!!
Yes they are all made up. If you come across someone who is using them WITHOUT credit (ask me first if you want to but GIVE ME CREDIT!!) please tell me and I will try and sort it out.Also, this is a murder story. You have to guess the murderer before it tells you at the end.
PLEASE DO NOT SAY ANY CLUES OR TELL US WHO THE MURDERER IS IN THE COMMENTS!!! Its not fair if you do.Alsooo im sorry if there is any errors or spelling mistakes. If there is please tell meand i will be able to fix it. Thank you!
Good luck everyone
Here weeeee gooooo
The shouts echoed the house. The house of 4 children, a mother and a father. This night started out like any other.
Rey was 23. He has dark brown hair styled in a quiff. He has brown eyes. He works at a photographer or as people think.
Freddy was also 23 and he was Reys identical twin.You could tell them apart because their personalities are different. Freddy cared for his siblings but on the other hand Rey hated them. He went out of he way to make their lives a misery. But by doing that, he is hurting himself more than his peers. Rey and Freddy also wear different styles of clothing. Rey usually wears all black and Freddy normally wears an off white suit. For identical twins their personalities are quite the opposite.
Juliet has ginger hair like her mothers. She is like her mother in many ways. She enjoys playing the piano. She sometimes gets misdirected and agrees to do things she shouldnt. For example once Rey asked her to swim across the lake but Juliet was not a good swimmer and the lake was deeper than she thought. She disagreed but then Rey pulled out a £10 note(which he never gave her in the end)and without questioning where he had got it from, Juliet swam in. She got half way and she couldnt see the floor. She was scared but she looked back and didnt see Rey. She saw somebody else. She couldnt quite make out who but the person had something shiny in their hand. Juliet started screaming for help because she couldnt swim anymore. She was getting weaker. She let out one more cry for help and as hand reached down and grabbed her by the waist and pulled her to shore. She was too weak to see the person who saved her and she passed out on the grassland surrounded by dead grass.
Their Mother, who goes by the name Anya, trys to be kind. She is the one with all the money. The children plead her for money. Her relationship with Scarlett and the twins are not good. She is more alike to Juliet.
Their Father,Anders, has brown hair and brown eyes. He gets on well with everyone. He has a few quarrels here and there but nothing to bad to get people hurt.
Scarlett was different. She was the youngest of the group as she was only 16. She had blonde hair and bright lively blue eyes. She had a scar on her forehead which made everyone call her Scar. She seemed to know everything but be oblivious to the truth.
It wasnt hard to work out why she was different.Tonight was like no other. Scarlett pleaded her mother for more money. Nobody knew what she would do with it but every other night it was the same.
"Mother, please." Scarlett pleaded.
"Scar! No!"The scar was stuck on her forehead as a reminder that Rey knew something that she didnt.
Scarlett was 6 and she was playing with Freddy in the garden. She could tell that it was him because of the way he would lift her onto his shoulders and spin around. Rey wouldn't do that because he didnt care about anyone except himself.
"Watch out Scarlett!"
Her face hit the pavement but there was a sharp pain in the middle of her forehead. It was bleeding.
"Oh Look at this. Scarlett has become Scar." A voice yelled from above Scarlett.
She pushed herself up. Her forehead had gone into contact with 13 year old Reys boot.
"Rey! At least help you sister!" Freddy yelled as he ran up to them.
Rey approached Freddy and whispered something into his ears and then picked up Scarlett.
Scarlett was then grabbed by Freddy. But before she could go, Rey whispered the words, "You are not one of us." into scarletts ear."I need them mother!" Scar carried on.
In the room next door was Juliet, Rey and Freddy.
Rey and Freddy were having an argument. They had arguments often.
"You cant take that too Rey, its mine."
"What like everything else that is mine that you still take."
"Name one thing!"
"Lucia."Rey and Lucia met at a park. It was young love and it was too good to be true. Lucia had black hair and her eyes sparkled in the moonlight. Soon Freddy found out and introduced himself. After a month Lucia told Rey that she was together with freddy and was never seen again.
"I didnt take her away from you."
"So where is she then!" Rey's voice was starting to raise.
"I dont know."
"Yes you do!" Rey stood up and ran over to Freddy.There was an ear piecing scream which stopped Scarlett bugging her mother and run into the room next door.
Juliet had her hand grasped on Reys arm trying to pull him back and Rey had his hand positioned around the neck of his Twin brother.
"Rey! Get off him!" Anders yelled whist trying to pull Rey off Freddy."No I will not. I will stay fighting. I will fight for Lucia no matter how hard it will be or become. Dead or alive, I will keep fighting." Rey screamed at the family.
Scarlett looked at her brother, Rey, in the eye and sighed. He smiled and laughed.
"Rey. Please. Why are you so violent?" Juliet asked him calmly.
"Im not so violent Juliet. Have I ever struck you?" He replied.
She shook her head slowly.Rey nodded and walked towards the door pushing through Anya and Scarlett on his way.
He turned and looked into Scarlett's eyes and then he walked away."Freddy are you okay?" Scarlett ran up to him and hugged him.
"Yes. But there is something you need to know." Freddy sighed and he had his arms wrapped around Scarlett.
"What is it?"
"You will find out yourself" was Freddy's answer.A piano started softly playing. It was Juliet. She was good at piano. You could hardly hear it sometimes because of the family's arguments.
The piano seemed to sooth the family.

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You thought that you were safe.-Murder
Mystery / ThrillerWhen a murder happens at a house at night, the family are shocked. who could of committed the crime of killing their own flesh and blood. And why do it? Can you work it out?