The Visit

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"I haven't spoke to my mom in 15 years but she said she wanted to to see her grandkids and spend time with you and your brother for a week" Mom said. "Well I got to do the interview for the documutery later I got to finish packing for you and your brother. She said. Well OK .

Me and my brother Mack got on the train, and mom started to cry, I'm going to miss her" trying not to cry I said, but I'm excited .

Tuesday morning

We arrived "let's get our bags" mack yelled outside. Alright, I said and than I saw a sign saying " Emily and Mack" so I got very excited and ran to them and hugged them tight so did Mack.

The house is white and has vines and moss covering the the two front windows."I picked the blise bed"",Mack said. No first dibs, I yelled. He got mad, I don't even care anyway, pop-pop got a cabin and we went outback and saw where mom used to okay his and go seek." Yes this is where your mom used to play with her friends at, under here" Nana said.
Well let's play, I screamed starting to count while mack hide,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10, here I come,I scream, crawling. Than I here something ,Mack, I yelled. Than I turned around and saw Nana, her face covered with here hair looking creepy, then I hear Mack scream ,leaving me no choice but to crawl as a fast as I can out .

Dinner is ready ,Nana called .
All of us is at the table eating. I finished so did Mack so we went to our room and pop-pop came and said we are old people so bed time her is 9:30 don't leave you room after that time. Its 7:45 so we said OK, then we called mom on Skype, her showing off how she's on a cruise so we talk and and sat on our beds and ,I want some more of grandma cookies, I said. Than go get some ,Mack said .We are not suposed to leave after 9:30 it 10:21., I said but go up anyway and opened the door on may way to the stairs and than I saw,Nana walking and throwing up, I ran back to the room.

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⏰ Last updated: Apr 22, 2016 ⏰

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