The WingGirl

Intro

Hi hey hello

This is my first serious piece, and I would love it if you guys gave feed back about it :)

Here's the intro-

"Lealia has known Jonathan her whole life; from birth, their parents have sent them to the same school and they have both lived in the same neighborhood. It's the beginning of senior year, and Jonathan has a goal, but only Lealia can help him. But what happens when his plans change because of her?"

Please every and any comment/vote/read means a lot to me, even things that need to be fixed. No one's perfect, but you guys can help me make this book the best it can be.