Jared's p.o.v
it has gotten dark and i have no clue where i'm at my mom must be worried about me. As i was was walking in the streets i heard a little girl say " He is coming." she said i thought for a moment, who was coming i didn't understand what she was talking about but she said it again " he is coming " she said again " who is?" i asked the little girl, she pointed at the sky and i looked up, and the moon was red " ummm i don't suppose that's normal is it?" i asked she looked up at me, she had no eyes. I had to back up just little because i didn't want her to attack me " i gotta go my mom is going to be worried about me." i said nervously " how old are you Jared?" the girl asked " how do you know my name?" i asked turning around " ummm Jared who are you talking to?" a familiar voice asks i then turned my head to see kyle staring at me with a scared look on his face, i turned my head back around and the girl was gone " kyle I swear to you there was a little girl standing there just a second ago." I said to him he just looked at me " OK buddy I need to get you home right now." Kyle said I swear I wasn't going crazy. I finally got home and my mom was waiting in the kitchen " hi mom sorry I got home late, umm where's uncle Garret?" I asked my mom " your uncle went out to get groceries, oh Jared I thought someone kidnapped you." She said worriedly " I know mom I'm sorry it won't happen again I swear." I told her, she then calmed down. ( two weeks later ) " OK kids we have a new student coming now all of you be nice to him." Mrs. Halagon said and as soon as I heard her say that I remembered that just a year ago I moved in this town and came to school and was shoved into my own locker first day of it I'm gonna feel bad for the new guy. I soon looked towards the door of the classroom and someone walked in he was kinda tall, he had shoulder length black hair, he wore a black jacket and a white shirt, he had redish blueish eyes, and his shoes were black and grey." Hi there welcome to hinan highschool I'm Mrs. Halagon what's your name." She asked the new guy, hold on shouldn't she have his name written in the role " my name is zang." He said and half the class laughed I just layed my head down at the thought of these people were laughing at me when I came here, yes I used to wear glasses but now I don't I got my eyes fixed. I lifted my head to see if zang's expression changed but it didn't it stayed the same. After he was finished introducing himself he sat right between two of meanest guys in the school both of them bullied me, but I don't know why I haven't thought of sitting in the middle of two bullies because they are not allowed to fight in classrooms or around the school area yet after the class was over you wanna guess what I saw yes the new guy getting pushed around like a ragdoll " you think your so tough don't you, you think you can just sit between us and not get punished well your dead wrong." One of them said but zang looked he didn't even care that he being pushed around like that, actually he looked like he was enjoying himself but why " well you boys have a great word choice but mess with me more i could quite be your worse nightmare." zang said what did he mean by that i thought i then felt my arm get pulled and i saw kyle '' jared what is wrong with you why would you just stand there while the new guy is getting bullied you know that makes you look a bully right?" kyle said i then realized that i was just standing there, yet the thing is i couldn't move. Just as i got home my mom looked scared to see me " mom what's wrong you look like you have seen a ghost what happened?" i asked her, but she didn't answer me then she spoke " oh Jared sorry i was just thinking of something mm sorry so what do you want for supper?" she asked " i don't really care." i said and then i went up stairs and got in the shower. After i got out of the shower i was thinking of what the new guy said at school today and then my mom called me down to eat i came down stairs and was startled by someone standing outside our window staring at me " Jared what's wrong?" mom asked " mom there is someone standing outside our window." i said starting to panic " umm no there isn't." she said looking out the window and i then rubbed my eyes and looked at the window and saw no one " Jared are you getting any sleep at night?" she asked me worriedly " no mom i'm not getting any sleep." I said she just looked at me and asked why I haven't I haven't been getting any sleep so I told her and after I did she just laughed " mom I'm telling you its true there was a little girl mom please you have to believe me!" I yelled but she still thought I was going crazy so then I ran outside " Jared please wait!" She yelled but it was to late I had already gotten half way down the street. It was really cold tonight well it was getting close to halloween, but I just walked down the street and heard something and it wasn't human so I followed the sound just like everyone else would and I saw something inhuman and not animal it was a black creature and it was digging into something but what was it and why was it doing it, but when it turned around its head wasn't attached to its body " Jared why are you here please don't look at me I'm a monster." It said " who are you?" I asked the creature " its me zang." The monster said " what zang, what are you?" I asked him " this is the real me and my name isn't zang its zalgo." He said who is zalgo I thought but I couldn't say it I was already creept out of what I saw " grrr Jared go away please I already killed two kids I don't want to harm you either." Zalgo said, hold on how did he know my name I only met him today why is this happening hold on that little girl " are you the little girl i saw two weeks ago?" I asked but he didn't answer me." Zalgo answer me are you the cause of what I saw!" I began to yell but that scared him a little " yes I am, and you were not supposed to see me this way." He said, why would he tell me to do that " GO NOW JARED please" he said as he ran off "no wait i have more questions... he's gone.".I got back home at 1:30am thanks to my watch" JARED WHY DID YOU RUN OFF LIKE THAT!!!" My mom yelled and i said i was sorry about 20 times before she forgave me and i went to my room and went to bed.
ending to first so how was it for my first part so far hmm? yes i am very new here so i need alittle help with somethings sorry if you don't like it but don't hate the player, hate the game you know the saying so please don't hate on this story just don't look at it if you find no interest in stupid stuff like this ok you don't have to like it but be nice about it ok
