The Raffle

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(Because I went to Disney for fall break and I was constantly thinking about Invader Zim. Anyways, this is the info in my story:
Dib: age: 18 height: 6'3"
Zim: age: ??? height: 5'8
Bonnabelle: age: ??? height: 6'4"
Gaz: age: 17 height: 5'11"
Gir: age: 7 height: didn't change
Gir's age is smallest because he was built right before Zim went to Earth. When I think Dib was eleven. Don't worry though, Gir's age doesn't affect his mind. Though, it may seem that way.
I DO NOT OWN INVADER ZIM, DISNEY WORLD, UNIVERSAL STUDIOS, OR ANY OF THE SONGS USED!!!!
Oh, Girtrude and Bonnabelle are bassed off Melanie Martinez and her character, Crybaby
Enjoy!)

~Dib's P. O. V.~
"BONNABELLE'S HALLOWEEN RAFFLE!!!!!!" The poster read. "Each ticket only $5! One lucky winner and a plus one will win a trip to Disney World and Universal Studios!!! Fast passes included!!!!! Condo will also be payed for!"

"Gaz!" I yelled. We were walking home and I had spotted a poster for a contest. Bonnabelle was Gaz and I's favorite singer. So naturally the poster caught my attention. Gaz turned around and gave me the 'what is it now?' look. "Come and look at this!" Gaz rolled her eyes and walked over to me. She looked at the poster and un-tensed slightly. She read the poster quickly and then looked at me.

"Do you wanna go?" She asked. "It's at the carnival across town, Bonnabelle's gonna draw the ticket tomorrow night... She'll probably sing a few songs too..." I smiled wide, Gaz wanted to go, and so did I. But she wanted me to go with her, I could tell. How? Because she asked me. Now, Gaz knew I wanted to go and get a ticket, but even if I didn't. I'd still end up going anyways. My sister was an unstoppable force, EVERYONE knew that.

"Yea I wanna go!" Gaz smiled, a small smile, but a real one. Not an evil smile, not a sarcastic or a fake one either. Gaz truly smiled, man, I can't remember the last time she did that...

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Gaz and I rode probably about, hm, I don't know... Fifteen different rides? And some of them more than once. We also went to the petting zoo, but we left shortly after we arrived because the goats kept biting my trench coat.

We decided to go to the freak show also. Most of the attractions were complete crap. Until we got to the end. My mouth dropped open, sitting in a dunk tank like caged seat, was Zim. Not wearing his disguise. He also wasn't wearing very "protective" clothing.

"ZIM?!?!?!"
"Dib-stink?!"
"What the hell are you doing here?!"
"What are YOU doing here?!"
"I'm here for the raffle!"
"I work here!" We exchanged glares and Gaz and I left to go to the raffle.

There was a GIGANTIC green and black circus tent with bleachers on the west, south, and east side. There was a stage in front of all of them. Though the tent was big, Gaz and I still could barely find a seat. In fact, we wouldn't have, but Gaz pushed a kid off his seat...

Zim had left the freak show tent and was also there. He sat almost directly across from me. He put his disguise and clothes back on-thank GOD.

The lights shut off and a spotlight pointed at the stage. Bonnabelle stepped out wearing an old timy dress. (It was poofy at the end and it was withered gray-purple and gray-blue. It matched her silvery skin, her fuchsia hair that hung over her cyan eyes, and she wore black heels. In other words, she looked like a doll that had been freshly opened.)

The crowd wend wild, including me and Gaz-well-Gaz got as exited as Gaz gets. I looked across the stage at Zim, who was ALSO cheering.

"How is everyone doing this fiiiiiine evening?!" Bonnabelle said happily into her microphone. Yet again the crowd cheered loudly. "This is Girtrude broadcasting live from the Halloween carnival!" (Girtrude was her real name) She turned to a camera and spoke directly at it.

"Oh, what's that?" She turned and put her hand to her ear as if she was talking into a wireless headset. "Bonnablle wants to come out? I don't know... She can be a bit of a handful..." She turned towards the audience. "What do you guys think?" She held the microphone out and everyone cheered. Everyone obviously wanted her in character.

"Oh, well, it looks like the audience feels differently! Let me go get her!" She walked offstage and came back wearing some makeup and lipstick. She looked broken and stared lifelessly at the crowd.

"Hello everyone! I am Bonnabelle!" Once again, everyone cheered. Music started playing and the audience quieted down. Bonnabelle sang Dollhouse, Pity Party, Tag You're It, Mad Hatter, then finally Training Wheels.

Two girls completely covered up accept for their eyes-blue and gold-stepped out rolling a giant jar jar on wheels. The raffle tickets!

Bonnabelle turned and grinned at the crowd. Then she dug her hands and most of her upper half into the jar. She came back up with a raffle ticket.

"The winner... Of the raffle is... Number 2002! Dib Membrane!" My jaw dropped. I won?! I never win things!!! "And his plus one Zim!" Gaz smirked evilly. Gaz didn't write her name on her ticket! She wrote Zim's! "Get on up here boys!!!"

Zim and I walked through the crowd and onto the stage. Giving each other death glares as we did so.

"Congratulations you two! Is there anything you'd like to say to the millions of people watching?" Bonnabelle brought the microphone to Zim's mouth.

"I did not agree to be this.. 'plus one'..." Zim murmured. Bonnabelle turned and did the same to be.

"For all of the people who called me names, IN YOUR FACE!" I flipped the camera off and the audience got a kick out of it. Some were cheering and others were laughing, though there was a small group booing, but I didn't care.

"Well that's certainly something worthy for T.V." Bonnabelle chuckled. "You two will be leaving for Florida in three days, a limo will pick each of you up and drive you to the airport." She looked straight at the camera. "This has been Bonnabelle's Halloween raffle! Thank you for watching!"

The lights in dimmed and everyone left. Oh god, I have to go to Florida-with Zim!!!

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