kidnapped by the vampire prince

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"Violet" my mum Izzy shouted from down stairs "yeah mum is there anything I can do for you" I asked "yeah wake up Ty he will be late for school again" as always I thought "okay mum"

If any of you haven't noticed I'm violet funny actually because I have violet eyes I am a cheerleader so I'm very popular we live in a six house bedroom with a very large pool its more like a mansion I have my own personal maid called Laura no I don't call her maid as that would just annoy me. I have a boyfriend who has been with me for 3 years now my birthday is in 2 days yeah I know I hate having to go to school on my birthday its 18th of July now I have my birthday 20th July.

I knock on my older brothers door "wake up you lazy man" I said to my 17 year old brother "I'm up" he mumbled there was a knock at the door "Laura get that will you" suddenly zake (my boyfriend)comes running up the hall scopes me up and kisses me "Zake it wasn't that long since I saw you babe " I said to my lovely boyfriend "its been twelve hours and 30 minuets "I laughed my brother came out "hey man" yep Zake was my brothers best friend. "lets goo" Zake said we all went to the limo I kissed mum goodbye. when we reached school my group of friends came running at me "hey guys " i said to my group "hey babe hey hiya and hello " all my group and brothers group said oh yeah i forgot to tell ya I'm head cheerleader and my brother is captain in football / rugby so all his team and the rest of my cheerleaders hang out my best friend goes out with my brother and i go out with her brother my best friends name is Annie she's amazing but she doesn't think so at our school we get prefects who help the head teacher/teachers run the school me, ty,zake,Annie ,Lucy and jenny we either get voted or picked by the by the teachers and as you can see only certain amount of students get prefect(i know because i went for it but didnt get it :() the bell went we all went too gym we did running with the boys so me and my brother and my boyfriend were all in front of the others what can i say i go running with these two at weekends. After we went to free period so we hung out outside then the rest off the day went like that we enjoyed hanging out in the pool after school at our house i then went to my laptop and there was an email from a nobody so i checked it and it said WE WILL MEET SOON BABE wth does that mean after doing my home work i went too bed